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Morning Raga - "Tell Me A Story!"

In the first grey light of dawn, a young woman begins the morning song.
The simple cadences of her song are as tranquil and liquid as the monsoon rain, 
Trickling down the broad leaves in her mother’s garden.
The steady drumming on the veranda roof echoes her rhythms. 

She sings of joys, of sorrows, and of love … always of love … 

This morning song is as familiar and comforting as a lullaby.
Her mother brought it with her from the South, 
And sang it every morning for her father.
Now, she sings for them both, as they begin the day.

Today will be special for her.
She is to meet her future husband for the first time.
She has never seen him, but she trusts her parents’ judgement … 
After all, they love her, don’t they?

She hopes he will be kind, and maybe a little bit handsome … 
Like the boy she’s seen in town.
But she must try to forget him … 

On another veranda, a young man sits silent, listening.
He sits here at every dawn to hear the morning raga, 
Entranced by the voice of a girl he cannot see.

He, too, is to meet his betrothed today.
He wishes she might be a singer, or at least enjoy the morning song,
When she comes to live at his mother’s house.

He remembers a lovely girl he saw … sly glances, shy smiles … 
If his new wife is half as pretty, he will be well content.
Yes! He will … 

He believes his secret is safe, but mothers see everything … 
And his mother loves him. So she whispered to a friend,
And her friend whispered to another, and, well … 
A good husband is not hard to persuade … 

The sun has risen above the clouds.
There is much to do today – and if the young people agree,
There will be a lucky Monsoon wedding to arrange.

But first, the song.

Entered in Elaine's "Tell me a story" contest

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  1. Date: 12/29/2012 1:49:00 PM
    A wonderful story you tell...pd

  1. Date: 12/18/2009 5:48:00 PM
    Dear Frances, Thank you for participating in my contest and congratulations on your win. A truly magnificent sotry. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 12/18/2009 8:13:00 AM
    Frances, Congrats on your win in Elaine's contest "Tell Me A Story", so very well deserved! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/18/2009 12:10:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in Elaine's contest Frances.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 12/17/2009 2:07:00 PM
    Delightful writing, Frances. Enjoyed the clever reference to a "Monsoon wedding." Congratulations on your success in Elaine's contest! Wishing you happy holidays filled with joy and love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/17/2009 1:41:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery to share your story. Congratulations being a winner in Elaine's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 9/27/2009 6:51:00 PM
    lovely story! Frances!...and thanks for your comments!... jim

  1. Date: 9/27/2009 12:05:00 PM
    nicely penned, nice story, thank you for your comments.

  1. Date: 9/27/2009 8:09:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in Debbies contest Frances.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words on my entry.

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 10:43:00 AM
    ~~~WOW~~~ Frances~~~Awesome writing. Love, Carol