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More Than Words Can Say, Papa

The first guy who kissed me by my lips Tickled me down to my fingertips Careful to handle me with every grip Selfless love without a director's script You are my first ever boyfriend Guarding me, every now and then Always ready to mend and defend ''My ideal man'', you set the blend Your strong arms have held me dear My shield through raging storm of fears Same wide open arms keep me on cheer Every time there are thunder rolling tears A gaze likened to a tiger's eye Strict and firm with my cry Yet, tender daring me with tries Letting me free to soar and fly Although now, I'm more than twenty Father, your patience is so plenty Providing me both love and penny Even when things get so messy Us, your family, is your sweetest cherry With every ounce of life's' chevy You remain ready and so sturdy My love grows for you each day Father... My ever dearest Papa. Thank you for all love you display I am sorry if by chance I disobey Do know that I love you More than those words (above) say... __________________________________________ 1:37 am, May 01, 2014

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Date: 11/28/2015 1:51:00 PM
Olive, congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 11/27/2015 1:41:00 PM
A lovely heartfelt tribute to your Papa! Great write, Olive! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/27/2015 8:25:00 AM
This is a sweet dedication. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/26/2015 5:18:00 AM
Heartfelt and tender Olive for a very special man.
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Date: 11/26/2015 3:53:00 AM
Congrats on ur win with this poem Olive.. great work!
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Date: 3/19/2015 3:54:00 PM
Ones love for her father abounds from the poets words. Olive, this is such a lovely poem about your father, hugs//Jamesxxx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2015 7:05:00 AM
thanks much James.. =`) hugs!
Date: 10/26/2014 10:34:00 PM
The last line here is love full.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2015 6:55:00 AM
thank you Dan.. =`)
Date: 6/15/2014 7:22:00 PM
Anytime Olive, hope you are having a sweet day...Linda
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Date: 6/11/2014 10:23:00 PM
Olive,, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/14/2014 5:27:00 AM
ThanksLinda.. :)
Date: 6/10/2014 7:46:00 PM
you touch me with this affectionate tribute,eloi.. congrats and huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 2:20:00 PM
:) Thank you Nette.. :) hugs and hugs too.. :)
Date: 6/10/2014 9:43:00 AM
Such a charming tribute to your papa...Congrats ...love, Deb
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 3:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Deb.. :) God bless you always. :D
Date: 6/10/2014 8:41:00 AM
Beautiful, moving tribute to your Papa - excellent write.Congratulations on a great win! Kindest regards!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 3:02:00 PM
Thanks MUch PAndita.. :) your remarks are truly inspirational. :)
Date: 6/9/2014 10:55:00 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 11:55:00 PM
thank you/// :)
Date: 6/9/2014 8:45:00 PM
A great tribute to your father my friend! Congrats on your win!!!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 11:54:00 PM
THanks much.. :)
Date: 6/9/2014 7:26:00 PM
A great and loving daddy is a girl's greatest treasure. Congratulations that you have him. Love, Joyce
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 11:54:00 PM
Thank you so much.. :)
Date: 6/3/2014 3:25:00 PM
a very sweet tribute to your papa. Will you give this poem to him as a Father's Day gift?
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 12:51:00 PM
I hope too Andrea..:) someday when I'll get home I'll give him this personally..:)
Date: 6/1/2014 4:51:00 PM
nice poem
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/3/2014 6:23:00 AM
Thanks for the drop by Mohammad.. :) GBu
Date: 6/1/2014 4:36:00 PM
Talking like this to parents does not always come easy, but with this poem you have achieved what you set out to do....a fitting tribute to your father and to yourself for it also shows what wonderful persons you both are:) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 3:08:00 PM
Oh thank you Paul.. :) i don;t know what to say.. :D im scared if you will be t=on the honorary judge.. :D?!!!! weeee
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:15:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS because this poem DID merit a top placing. [Can't say the same of the winning list!!!]
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/3/2014 6:19:00 AM
yes.. :) I have wanted to touched all the aspects a father should be.. and that's what i put it here as this I saw in my father.. :) oh!!!!! thanks dearie Paul,.. you are as well wonderful.. :)
Date: 5/31/2014 9:23:00 PM
A beautiful piece for your papa.. He will be proud... Hugs Tim
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/3/2014 6:17:00 AM
OH thanks Tim.. well :) this here.. :) I do not share this to him but someday someday I will show him this.. :D hugs too.. :D
Date: 5/31/2014 7:50:00 PM
Impressive right and great love and devotion shown as it should be my friend!! Bravooooooo!!!!!!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/3/2014 6:14:00 AM
Yes, i love my father very much Robert.. :) He has been mostly away from me and once we don't talk as much but nevertheless each time there is chance to talk.. wow!!! i feel and feel through his eyes and his words his love... :) so i thank God for this.. :)
Date: 5/31/2014 7:02:00 PM
Simply delightful! Hugs Jan xxxxx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/1/2014 4:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan.. :)

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