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More Than a Significant Other - Iambic Meter

MORE THAN A SIGNIFICANT OTHER - IAMBIC METER! “Come live / with me / and be / my love.” I ask of you this because you are my ultimate desire. I refuse to hide it when you see it in my eyes. My mind is in a dreamlike state blowing kisses at you all of the time. You never see this because I am shy. I write you this poem now. Before I knew you, you knew me. You would see me standing outside by the fig tree. You would come to class by yourself. How do I know this? Well, your best friend is my best friend as well. He told me that you had asked who I am. You are such a wild orchid never going wild - a beautiful flower all the time. I love to get to know you and fulfill my ultimate desires. You and I together laid back chilling and comfortable in life, mutually agreeable to the definition of our beings, and most important, knowing our destiny vivaciously. “Come live / with me / and be / my love.” User Name: Verlena Pseudonym(s): Poethics Oblivion Stareyes of Oblivion Dark Sunshine Motif: Iambic Meter - Rhyme

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Date: 9/26/2014 7:12:00 PM
A little bit of magic.Light & love
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/26/2014 7:27:00 PM
Thanks for lighting my fire Debbie. Please visit more often. Love with a smile, Verlena...
Date: 7/25/2014 1:03:00 PM
SUper FLOW YO! Heavy love and all that good stuff. Btw. It's not Abercrombie style poems, it's ABECEDARIAN! DUh .....this brain O' mine does it's own thing at all times. One dang high speed LOCO-motive barreling down the tracks out of control. OH WELL, I suppose. You keep Penning the magic stuff. thanks ~Joey (and Jessica:) Hey, guess what? the CAPTCHA over to the right ------> reads: UR9. Ha, Sometimes I feel like a 9 year old trapped in a big old body!~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/25/2014 1:40:00 PM
JS, just a temper tantrum going on. Keep on trucking out of control... LOL Verlena :0))s!
Date: 7/22/2014 9:44:00 PM
Wow! Such a nice poem to read. All filled with love and affection. A winning piece indeed! Thanks, Verlena. LoveLots, Ara
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/22/2014 9:58:00 PM
Thanks Ara... Verlena
Date: 2/25/2014 5:02:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win. enjoyed the fine metrical composition,verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/22/2014 9:59:00 PM
Sorry, it took why to get this message Ram... Nevertheless, Thanks for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 2/25/2014 4:08:00 AM
Verlena, , congratulations on your wonderful win - SKAT
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Date: 2/25/2014 2:51:00 AM
- Contest judged: 2/24/2014 - Impress me - V (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio A.V. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Pleased to read your poem, Verlena. - nice to join :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/25/2014 3:00:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise... Verlena
Date: 2/17/2014 10:41:00 AM
Lucky you!!!...smile Good Work xoxoxo//Sinclair
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/17/2014 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Robert... Verlena
Date: 2/15/2014 8:09:00 AM
- This was truly a pleasure to read - you are very skilled, Verlena !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/15/2014 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Ms. Andersen... May I call you Anne Lise for this high praise and positive feedback... :) hugs & winks... Verlena - Dark Sunshine
Date: 2/14/2014 9:03:00 AM
Hi, I enjoyed reading your expressive poem. It struck me that it was about first love. Well done. Theresa xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/14/2014 11:27:00 PM
Thanks Theresa... Verlena -Dark Sunshine
Date: 2/12/2014 7:51:00 AM
I like it, Verlena! Great job :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/13/2014 10:55:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Toquyen and the positive feedback... Verlena
Date: 2/12/2014 12:48:00 AM
Awesome write! Thanks for your visit to my verse..
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/13/2014 10:52:00 PM
Thanks for the visit. Thanks a lot... Verlena
Date: 2/11/2014 11:40:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Verlena. You were inspired by a very famous and awesome line: Come live with me and be my love!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/12/2014 12:20:00 AM
Yes, I am in the mood for love Andrea... Thanks for the thumb up... Verlena

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