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Moon's Tears-Lost Innocence

Golden moon's tears rain through shear silken mist, when shadows grow long in evening breeze, the flute of the faun through hushed trees fills the night in baneful tryst. Arduous sounds of love's passionate caress leaving lovers' stolen kiss ever lost.
01/28/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/6/2016 3:01:00 PM
You are a poet extraordinaire! Your phrasing and imagery, and the skill with which you have crafted this splendid ETHEREE. Well done indeed!! Regards, Keith A favourite writer for me!
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James Inman
Date: 2/7/2016 9:56:00 AM
You leave me breathless, Keith. Three visits on a single evening and such exceptional comments coming from such an exceptional and prolific poet as yourself. Your kindness is overwhelming. A very deep Thank You to you Sir.
Date: 1/30/2016 9:00:00 AM
Such beautiful visuals in this well done Etheree, James.
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James Inman
Date: 1/30/2016 12:38:00 PM
Thank you Elaine.
Date: 1/30/2016 4:01:00 AM
" Moon's tears rain silken, through shear golden mists"
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James Inman
Date: 1/31/2016 4:38:00 PM
Thank you for the clarification, Mark. Your point is well taken.
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Anthony Mark
Date: 1/31/2016 2:11:00 AM
i personaly think "Golden" is a weak word to start a strong write ?
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James Inman
Date: 1/30/2016 8:09:00 AM
Not sure what your intent is here. Do you prefer this word placement or is it a reference to something else?
Date: 1/29/2016 8:30:00 PM
You never fail to amaze me with your evocative writing, my friend. So lovely!!
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James Inman
Date: 1/30/2016 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 1/29/2016 9:16:00 AM
- Lovely writing, James !!! - I wish you a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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James Inman
Date: 1/29/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise, enjoy your weekend as well.
Date: 1/28/2016 2:34:00 PM
WOW this is a stunning etheree James such lovely imagery in so few lines:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 1/28/2016 3:01:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 1/28/2016 10:05:00 AM
An admirable tear.Let it be of continual joy. Congrat.
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James Inman
Date: 1/28/2016 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Ovidiu.

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