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Moonbow (Revised)

A rainbow challenges the brash moons' night and three o'er ripe white stars all haloed glow, thus spot and light a virgin sight so bright within disperse prismatic gladened show. The stratum thin of clouds and sheering ice bespoke of sailor's tales and coming snow. Each tiny crystal hexagon enticed, romantic escapades so far below. And lovers cuddling shivered as they rode, in wagons on iced lanes bright cheeks a glow. Or, hand in hand throughout high mazes strode beneath a true and heavenly hued bow. So harvest season kissed a soft goodnight to summer with this wonderful delight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/17/2010 9:29:00 AM
Deb, this is really beautiful. I am late to my next class and will comment more on this later to you. LUv, andrea
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Date: 2/17/2010 7:18:00 AM
Very beautiful poetry today Deborah. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2010 7:35:00 PM
Deborah,this is a wonderful and romantic sonnet written with imagery and passion. Your vision of winter is described with true sentiment. I have enjoyed this amazing poem. Be proud of this magnificent creation. Love and hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 2/16/2010 6:22:00 PM
ROMANTIC ROMANTIC IT IS .....SWEET POEM..DEBORAH.....I HAVE YET TO SEE A RAINBOW AT NIGHT TIME ....IRMA
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Date: 2/16/2010 6:19:00 PM
nicely done. i often advise myself to re- work what i have in the past. to polish the brass is to make it shine. John HLoving III
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:02:00 PM
delightfully gentle... i enjoyed reading this poem
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Date: 2/16/2010 4:06:00 PM
Beautifully done, Deborah ... feels very old-wordly, romantic ... how is your hand holding going? ... smile ...
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Date: 2/16/2010 3:05:00 PM
Sweet lovely Romantico.. poem Deb..:)Charma
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:47:00 PM
Wow, I had to read a couple times... Wow....:JP]
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Date: 2/16/2010 12:50:00 PM
The last two lines I especially enjoyed. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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