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Moonbeam Visit

moon cradle swings slow
cloud curtains billow softly
starry night lights blink
amidst black velvet blanket...
as wind croons a lullaby

dreamy dust settles
sparkling against silken strands
as moonbeam peeks through

Sandman plants a sweet dream's kiss--
slumbering beauty breathes deep


**for Tracie's Moonlight Dreams contest :D

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  1. Date: 3/14/2012 9:44:00 PM
    Check out HP mail, will ya?

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 8:58:00 AM
    A capivating dream like poem Nikko. no wonder it won!!! Anne

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 9:18:00 AM
    A lullaby to dream with Nikko. Not only for babies but I feel the peace and see all the magic you portray. Just lovely!

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 4:37:00 AM
    Nikko~Go back and read A Winter's Kiss...see the note at the bottom...(hint hint). Wink wink. ;)

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 10:53:00 AM
    nikko, very calming, dreamy imagery in these tanka(as it should be here, right?). Dig the personification. Congratulations on your win! I didn't realize you had several new posts up. I am going to tackle them one at a time.

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 11:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 2:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win x

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 8:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nikko. Well written.

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 5:36:00 AM
    hey there Missy ;) I absolutley love the idea of the wind crooning (not sure about the word) lol.. That made me smile, reminded me about the lullaby thing hehe.. Congratulations on your win in the contest as well. Hope your weekend's been a great one ;) *mwahugs*

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 3:55:00 AM
    Congratulation on your fantastic win, my friend. bl

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 8:36:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Nikko! I have been counting my Tanka and posted it last night on the moonlight contest and I am so happy to see my name below yours. Yes, I am back in Seattle, but my dream vacation is still lingering in my mind. I enjoyed the local food pati "kambing". The Ilocanos make pulutan out of this. (I am not sure if you are familiar with this food). You might say ykks! Love Dalila Dalila

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 11:53:00 AM
    Like the first line, the rest as well. Great to hear about happy, peaceful dreams and slumbering beauties. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 11:12:00 AM
    Lovely poem and the sandman did come to visit me last night. Thanks for all your comments. Good luck in the contest. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 9:35:00 AM
    Oh, lovely and sweet, Nikko!! Just as dreamy as that sweet avatar picture!! I knew you must have been a beautiful baby!!

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 9:01:00 AM
    Simply beautiful, Nikko. I am seeing lots of good entries in this contest. I hope they all make the list and yours swinging at the top! Yes, I still love french fries, Nikko. but I realize potatoes are one of the worst foods a blood type O like me can eat. It's horrible for people with arthritis. I still have them maybe once a month. I don't dare eat more!

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 8:32:00 AM
    lovely, Nikko! jimbo

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 5:58:00 AM
    beautiful tanka for the contest nikko, some really dreamy imagery, this has to be one of the best I've read, it should place very high :-)

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 5:04:00 AM
    I love your take on the contest. Flowing images across my screen. Hugs all day for you. Luv Michael

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 4:49:00 AM
    Nikko very dreamy indeed, good luck, ps. if you had said silver strands you could have entered it in Susan's/ Andrea's contest as well, double whammy..David

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 2:06:00 AM
    Just charming I love the line [as moonbeam peeks through] Light & Love