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Moon Ray

The moon ray comes down to be upon the Earth I see some of it on my hand lightly cast It’s a grey, white light that’s been beaming since birth I just don’t know how long the moonlight will last For clouds may start to form on top of the moon But now the moon ray lights like an ancient rune There’s no colors present within the moonlight It shines ever-presently, showing its might
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 6/14/2013 6:12:00 AM
    Pretty pretty moon! In Arabic...when they want to tell a woman she is beautiful...they say "Your face is like the moon!" Or...they just call her Moon! :) This was a lovely piece...

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 2:52:00 PM
    Russell wishes for a speedy recovery. I hope it wasn't your sweet tooth. Your Quatrain is wondrous. A magical impression. The last line give it a special energy. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 8:34:00 AM
    I love moon rays Russell, so sorry to hear about your tooth surgery, I will send you some long distance healing thoughts, get well soon luv xxx

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 5:46:00 AM
    May the Moon's ray shine forever over you my friend! Silvery beautiful! Inspiring!

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 6:35:00 PM
    I can see how your poetry keeps getting better and better....this one shines! :)

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Russell...very magical and I never really thought of the moons light like that I will always.

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 4:18:00 PM
    Russell hi on a winner here I love the moon and its phases. You bring it to life in your poem lovely Shadow

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 12:01:00 PM
    A glimmering piece splashed with word-plays that celebrate moon's delight... how radfiant is this one, russell... i am enticed; greeat stuff, frreat form!...:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/12/2013 8:38:00 AM
    It's cool when you consider how long the moon has reflected light upon generations of us humans and how it continues to inspire our words. Well done again Russell.