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The Monster

I stood there transfixed in a corner atop a chair quivering with bulging eyes, Tears and sweat flowing in rivulets A lump in my throat Parched lips and ashen face; Was it a nightmare I wondered Or an enormous ogre I see? Things are not what they appear, they say. But I swear, standing in front of me baring its teeth in a sinister grin was a frightening sight I see crouching and its claws ready to strike-- God, I knew then, my end was at hand! An icy shiver shuddered through me. I shrieked for help but nary a sound I tried to run but nary a stir… When the door flew open and my 3 year old granddaughter walked in… Ha, there you are! I’ve been looking all over for you, sweetie pie… ...and bent down to gently pick her pet mouse! ~"Fear" contest by The Seeker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/24/2017 11:10:00 PM
A great write, Abdul, with an adorable ending! Some phobias bring such terror but almost seem silly. You described this so well. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/23/2017 7:24:00 PM
Oh Abdul what a GREAT ending!! So cute. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:45:00 PM
Ha Ha Ha...well phobia does not give us a choice even if ti is a small mouse! Congrats. :)
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Date: 2/22/2017 6:43:00 PM
Like the humor in your poem, Abdul. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 2/22/2017 4:12:00 PM
Nice, Abdul, good use of perspective. I can imagine those huge human hands....
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Date: 2/22/2017 3:33:00 PM
Great write Abdul, had me going from start to humorous ending. Congrats on a fine placement!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/22/2017 5:34:00 PM
Thanks John. You did pretty good.
Date: 9/3/2015 12:15:00 PM
ha ha ha sure sounds scary made me giggle good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/3/2015 3:24:00 PM
Man, mice scare the heck out of me--they are bad, bad wolves! lol. Thanks Jan.

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