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Monopolizing Greed

_____________________ With-in the projects in the desolate graveyard cost outweighs the pain A facade lingers his true intentions hidden their money, now his Building an empire floating along the boardwalk his kingdom blinding _____________________ Contest ~" Monopoly The Game Of Life " Poet ~ Rick Parise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win with this right on approach. Love, joyce
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:26:00 PM
sounds like Bernie Maydoff? Good one Rich lots to ponder. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2011 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations Rick ,on your first place win in the contest with this fine poem ~~
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Date: 6/3/2011 2:21:00 PM
Congrats again Rick on another first place victory for an excellent poem my friend..luv..
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Judy's "Monopoly" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 10:55:00 AM
Many congrats ^Rick on clinching top honours in Judy's contest. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:53:00 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Rick
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:18:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:14:00 PM
"The rich get richer, and........" Most don't even have to hide their true intentions, and they get away with it. Great write, Rick. Love, daver
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Date: 5/25/2011 4:11:00 AM
Cost outweighs the pain while floating along the boardwalk...well put, Rick. very good entry for the contest. Good luck
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Date: 5/24/2011 5:48:00 PM
From title to finish Rick this is a grandiose poem my friend.. u nailed the greedy aspect of this game... super .. good luck in the contest by Judy luv..
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:41:00 PM
very sensible write my friend ! I enjoyed it to the fullest
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Date: 5/24/2011 3:51:00 PM
Wow! You took the contest to a new level, Rick. Excellent introspective write. (Think you mean game of "life.") I'm sure this will be a winner -- it is for me. Wishing you success always, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2011 12:26:00 PM
Nice write how money influences, Rick
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Date: 5/24/2011 12:23:00 PM
very interesting,, money rules us and that is defiantly a fact
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