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rose weeps "my worst nightmare is that I will end my life in a vase . . . " __________________ August 19, 2016 Poetry/Monoku/Personification/flowers have souls too Copyright Protected, ID 16-819-486-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym For the contest, monoku madness sponsor, John Hamilton Second Place

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/23/2016 10:56:00 PM

I like it!

Joseph May

Date: 8/23/2016 9:02:00 PM

Congrats on your win Broken Wings

Lu Loo

Date: 8/23/2016 4:06:00 PM

Broken Wings, very sad and touching, perfect for you...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2016 3:47:00 PM

I can hear almost the rose sobbing Constance - super poem:-)hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/22/2016 9:43:00 AM

Can believe you to hear flower's laments Broken!Congrats on your win!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2016 9:25:00 AM

The pained soul of a personified rose...beautiful monoku, Constance. Congratulations on this high flying win. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/22/2016 7:05:00 AM

Oh really clever Constance. I see why this placed high! Congratulations! 7 ; )

Just James

Date: 8/22/2016 1:21:00 AM

Sweet write great win

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2016 8:51:00 PM

Oh perfect monoku, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2016 8:15:00 PM

oh this is so cool. A great metaphor, Constance and big congrats.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/21/2016 7:26:00 PM

Broken Wings, congratulations on your fine win in the Monoku contest! Great personification! 7 Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/21/2016 4:38:00 PM

Hi BW, What a good one liner. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

John Hamilton

Date: 8/21/2016 4:04:00 PM

This one caught me by surprise I can usually detect your style instantly, but I guess with one line not so much! This was just what I was looking for great personification! Thanks for a class entry!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/21/2016 1:38:00 PM

Hi Constance, Yes, the rose would have this worry. This is such a beautiful Monoku. The stately rose, the bush itself shall always be, giving new blooms for those taken so it shall ever be. Foe the bush to die, that would be the sadness. It's blooms whared between lover's it would allow and have joy, at least i believe this. Your heart ever beats Love as does your rose, it shall never be found in a vase. Your rose ever shines in our hearts. This has to be a seven. Good luck. Love,,,,Mike, XX

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/19/2016 2:57:00 PM

Hopefully, you will never be cut off from the wonders of life. I wish I could redo the order of the universe sometimes. When I think of that, I also may think of you because of what you endured and how you express yourself about it. I hope you will have joy from every experience today and tomorrow. Pleasant wishes to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2016 8:02:00 AM

- Woow, well done - I agree, flowers have soul, B.W. - Luck in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 8/19/2016 7:01:00 AM

How wonderfully deep and clever BW. It should speak volumes to every intelligent, beautiful woman who is undervalued because of her looks.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/19/2016 6:20:00 AM

Great personification:)