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Monoku - Old Age

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brittle and tired bones stiff but must keep moving death quietly waiting _______________________ January 25, 2016 Poetry/Monoku/old age Copyright Protected, ID 16-748-852-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Best Monoku sponsor, Poet Destroyer Third Place

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/14/2016 7:34:00 PM
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so glad you got it in to THIS contest. It did very well, Constance. congrats to you.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2016 6:32:00 PM
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Andrea, me too, remember when I forgot to enter it, thanks for the congrats !
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/14/2016 1:58:00 PM
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Congrats on ur win...with love.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2016 2:00:00 PM
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MN, thanks for the congrats and the love !!
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/14/2016 11:26:00 AM
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A powerful monoku, describing fast approaching old age! We can't run away from reality!! ~ Congratulations on a truly merited win, Constance! ~ Regards // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2016 2:01:00 PM
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Paul, no one can avoid old age, it creeps up, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment ~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/14/2016 10:56:00 AM
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I really like this one. Makes one think!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2016 2:01:00 PM
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Laura, thanks for visiting and the compliment, appreciate ~
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/14/2016 7:45:00 AM
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Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2016 2:02:00 PM
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BL, thanks for the congrats and the love !!
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Date: 4/13/2016 8:39:00 PM
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Broken, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2016 2:04:00 PM
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Linda, thanks for another chance to use my monoku and I am honored with my placement ~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/25/2016 4:13:00 PM
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oh my, too much reminding me of myself. But I really like it, Constance!! I am late now for getting home. Uggg. I was only half finished here!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2016 5:04:00 PM
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Andrea, thanks for visiting my old brittle poem, lol, why do we have to work, dear heart, why can we not just write poetry all the time ~
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Thomas Martin
Date: 1/25/2016 2:23:00 PM
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Hmmm, nice monlku!
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Thomas Martin
Date: 1/25/2016 5:02:00 PM
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Nice but I meant to say very good! Constance, is a complement that I read it. Constance, almost never comment on Eastern forms here on Soup.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2016 2:54:00 PM
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Thomas, thanks for visiting and for the nice, appreciate ~
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Skat A
Date: 1/25/2016 6:41:00 AM
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Broken, wonderful entry. The best of luck. Skat
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2016 8:24:00 AM
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Thanks

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