Monoku 3

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Monoku 3 - Transformation

Monoku 3 brown and green colors of mud and grass three inches tall in spring

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Date: 12/5/2013 6:20:00 PM

great one line description of that time of the year. Wishing things were springing today in this cold snowy weather.

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/5/2013 8:10:00 PM

Sleet and cold wind here. I'm tired of it already...

Date: 12/4/2013 11:10:00 AM

very creative, jack... pen on!... huggs

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/4/2013 12:47:00 PM

Thanks, Nette...

Date: 12/4/2013 8:35:00 AM

Beautiful thought niucely penned creating a picture, Jack

Date: 12/4/2013 4:22:00 AM

- Well done Monoku, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/4/2013 8:59:00 AM

I thought a touch os Spring would be useful about now... Jack