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beautiful decay and winding tendrils caress- song birds twittering __________________ January 7, 2016 Poetry/Monoku/in the forest Copyright Protected, ID 16-742-272-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Monoku #1, sponsor, Poet Destroyer Sixth Place

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Date: 1/27/2016 2:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:29:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations !
Date: 1/26/2016 11:28:00 AM
BROKEN, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:21:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/25/2016 9:37:00 PM
thank you for the reply
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:27:00 AM
Linda, you are welcome, I was thrilled to place in your contest, so grateful for the honor ~~
Date: 1/25/2016 6:51:00 AM
Nature overcomes. Love the feel of this piece, BW. It is the beginning to an eerie tale, somewhat twisted but lighthearted at the same time.
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Date: 1/25/2016 8:26:00 AM
James thanks for visiting, yes there is an eerie beauty in the decay that inspires ~
Date: 1/24/2016 9:37:00 PM
woohoo!!! So glad you are on this list. Love this, Constance . I just had to see this list before bedtime!! Congrats to you.
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Date: 1/25/2016 3:09:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the great comment and the congrats, appreciate !
Date: 1/24/2016 8:51:00 PM
Broken, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --
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Date: 1/25/2016 3:10:00 AM
Linda, great contest and thanks for my placement, appreciate that very much ~
Date: 1/9/2016 3:51:00 PM
so many Beautiful thoughts and you caught em....this sounds like the beginning of autumn....Beautiful decay as the leaves start to change....and as they fall, not one eye can complain....because we all know Beauty in one way or another....and you have it all without any cover....;)
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:20:00 PM
Eric, thank you for that beautiful comment, appreciate it ~
Date: 1/7/2016 11:38:00 PM
great painting, Broken Wing, good luck in the contest. I wrote one, but not sure I did it right.
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Date: 1/7/2016 11:49:00 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 1/7/2016 7:08:00 PM
Perfect write , best of luck in the contest and hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/7/2016 11:27:00 PM
Dalia, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 1/7/2016 4:19:00 PM
one line and you got the image echoing... wow! excellent, you've got the wildness captured
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Date: 1/7/2016 5:25:00 PM
Sage, thanks for the wow and the excellent, appreciate !
Date: 1/7/2016 3:48:00 PM
what an interesting image and lovely: beautiful decay!
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Date: 1/7/2016 5:26:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting my poem ~

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