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Below is the poem entitled monday which was written by poet Milton Toran. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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four o' clock in the morning,
i'm feeling like a slob;
the alarm says that i must go,
to face this horrid job!

the weekend's all a tease,
just when i'm good and lax;
monday beheads my shallow pride,
like an executioner's axe!

my eyes are swollen crusty,
my breath's a putrid stench;
saliva soaks a beaten pillow,
my energy lies in a trench!

i dread each day of monday,
as i drag myself to the shower;
my nerves are like an itchy rash,
my attitude's vague and sour!

out the door i go,
to battle a huddled freeway;
monday is just the beginning,
where in the hell is friday?!!

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  1. Date: 9/28/2010 9:21:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry today Milt. Have a wonderful day. Nice to see you posting. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 1:36:00 PM
    Vdery creative and well expressed thoughts on monday all over, Milton