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Mixed Senses-Evening

In the purple smoky collaged sky The birds swam home on flaky water colours, carrying his rainy perfume. I prayed for this one night He would evenly spray my garden, Without the rumbling accompaniment Of his hurly burly friend flashing nightmarish psychedelic lights, but let Little Sue dream with her angels in peace. Balveen Cheema September 15, 2015 Contest: Mixed Senses Toipic: Evening Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 9/14/2015 6:16:00 PM
cute personification of nature in this one. Another contest I gotta check out really fast!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/15/2015 4:13:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Love

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