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Misty Day

Misty Day On a misty day, I think of you. On a misty day, I can almost see you. Your image I can see, but you are always alone and lonely. I think of you just standing there, with your arms empty and your hands cold - for they have no one to touch and they have no one to hold. I can almost see you with a sad look in your eyes and I wonder - why? A thought comes to my mind, that I could run through that mist and be by your side and that you could hold me, just one more time. Another thought invades my mind - that it can not be, that it is not right, because I am not free, but you will always be here with me, in my mind and in my thoughts - you will always be. The mist keeps getting thinner and you slowly start to fade away. I just keep standing there until you disappear. Than the misty day is over - for the sun has come out and taken the mist away...
09/23/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 4:21:00 PM
    very nicely done Lucilla , remember walking thru foggy days as teen ;}

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 11:11:00 AM
    Wonderfully haunting piece... Bravo...

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Good day My lovely Friend Lucy, I am happy you are hear, and sharing the depth of your pen. I hope that mist is not a bad one, or hurtful view... Thanks for the sun always clearing up our days... Light is always more than light... Linda

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 12:30:00 AM
    WOW Great Metaphor. I Enjoy reading this poem Nothing last forever every good thing comes to a end .....I love this poem JCMT

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 12:07:00 AM
    Wonderfully written! Inspiring and touching, great work!

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 10:24:00 PM
    Lovely, we both wrote of mist on the same day!!

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:17:00 PM
    Moving poem here with excellent use of images. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this creative and emotive work..I get a feeling of loneliness and sadness in it..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 3:23:00 PM
    I've enjoyed your reverie and your hearts uttered desire, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 3:01:00 PM
    i'm gonna close my eye's and try this with a girl named Stacey, my ex wife. Hmmm...Hmmmm....hmmm..... nope could'nt get it.

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 1:11:00 PM
    On an ex perhaps, wow a fantastic emotive poem imaginative how u see him in d mist n all. Kudos! Pls do review my latest poem.:)

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 11:29:00 AM
    such a refreshing take with bits of nostalgia in this piece, lucy... divinely composed; i like the mood!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Hi! my friend, I feel it metaphysical something here, is it true? Lovely done,. Loved always, bl

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 9/24/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tuff question, but I'll answer it. At one time, not anymore. I live by myself now. Have a nice day. Lucilla
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:26:00 AM
    Misty days do come everyone's life though it brings sadness, Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:23:00 AM
    this is such a nice poem from you. Sad one too. One of your best poems, dear.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 9:50:00 PM
    This is a tremendous and wondrous write my friend! You have written a spectacular poem here Lucy! I just love the way you have written this incredible piece! BTW I haven't heard back from PS about your problem of posting your poem into my contest, sorry I can't be of more help! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 9:16:00 PM
    All I have to say on this write is NICELY done full of emotion thank for sharing this special poem with me. Also thank you for your comments on my poetry.