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Mistaken, Nighttime Musings

There is no paradise Take the remedy like a dutiful child No questions, it's for your good. Can it help? Will it fix me? Drinking the cure like life itself Don't you look at me. I know what I am, has it helped yet? They say there's help They say there's hope. Did they lie? Do they know? The stars and stains are breathtaking The void is close, so close. Can I go? Do I stay? Take the remedy like dutiful child No questions, it works. Are you wrong? Am I getting better? No paradise...

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Date: 5/13/2016 11:31:00 PM
ariel, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 9:06:00 AM
Ariel, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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