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Mistake of a Lifetime...Part 5

By the sound of her voice and the redness of her skin, I can see the type of agonizing pain she is in. Her scream is as loud as can be. It seems like her life is going to end as far as I can see. As soon as we enter the hospital, everyone stares at her and I. Then suddenly she screams,"OH MY GOD I'M GONNA DIE!!!". The doctors rush to her without any further say or do. They quickly run her to a room so I run along with them too. Her heavy breathing and screaming proved that she was going through excruciating pain. And the intensity of her actions makes it seem like her life is going down the drain. The painful tears and the deep depression in her eyes just makes me want to break down and cry. "IT'S COMING !!", she franticly yells. Now it seems that my life is going straight to Hell. The doctor says," You've got to push. Push like you've never pushed before !". Now she begins to push more and more. Suddenly, in a breif few seconds, the baby is out and for all to see. But the only thing I see wrong about the baby is that it barely looks like its mother, but looks completely nothing like me. Now I'm left with this blank expression on my face with nothing to say and not knowing what to do. But that really doesn't matter right now because here comes baby number two... ...(To be continued)...

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Date: 6/29/2010 9:05:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jovarrus. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 8:32:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii vacationing luv..
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