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Mirrored Sky

The sky is mirrored into her tired soul Alongside of her blatant mistrust there Is a lightening flash of minute enroll Her whole feelings are in disarray here The causing of a plethora recess The sky is mirrored into her tired soul She falters to the spell of her buttress All of this frolicking comes by her toll Her heart will become as sheer black as coal Wounded her tiredness bleeds as sore fiction The sky is mirrored into her tired soul Her lifeless stare enters sour depiction Terror that is within her eyes comes forth Twilight distrust is out beyond her shoal She evaluates just what is her worth The sky is mirrored into her tired soul
Russell Sivey Contest: MIRROR Sponsor: Nathan A. 6/10/2013

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Date: 7/25/2013 5:48:00 AM
Thoughtful and very much worth the read. It's a shame poets like you don't get more exposure!
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Date: 7/7/2013 11:06:00 AM
Russell, CONGRATS!! in the mirror contest.... Linda
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Date: 7/2/2013 8:11:00 AM
Russell congratulations on your fine. This is a fav of mine. Thanks for sharing. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/1/2013 8:02:00 PM
Russell, congrats in Nathan's MIRROR contest............... have yourself a sweet day............ SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 3:17:00 PM
You got me with this one Russ, what is a [plethora recess?] what is a what is the spell of a [ buttress?] // a buttress is an architectural support// I liked how you moved line one down through the other 4 verses this deserves a bit more polishing! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/30/2013 2:59:00 PM
I believe you have put lots of feeling into this one Russell; great result, congrats..'
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Date: 6/30/2013 1:48:00 AM
Russell, your contest entries are almost always judged near the top..... This one is a fine example as to why.... Congrats... Jake
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Date: 6/29/2013 4:59:00 PM
interesting, CONGRATS!
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Date: 6/11/2013 11:32:00 AM
another gem, this one, russell... the depth of your language is compelling like a mirror reflecting a tormented soul... grrreat work!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/11/2013 7:10:00 AM
Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading t his one today..Thanks for all the visits over the last week and today..Your comments are very uplifting..I hope that your visit with your brother was a great one..Sara
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Date: 6/11/2013 7:02:00 AM
I like this metophor, well done Russell.
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Date: 6/11/2013 6:58:00 AM
Frightening depiction of the soul's state in utter mesmerizing verse! Good luck!
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Date: 6/11/2013 12:50:00 AM
hmmm, which contest might this be. I think I missed out on it!! Good job, Russell.
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