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Mirrored Actions - a Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Their meeting of hearts in joyous touch Beating in sync, naked chest to breast Roaming hands in wondrous clutch Torso's of they in loving impressed Their meeting of minds, thoughts wed to lock Thinking out loud, he knows her path she knows his art Thighs twine in pumping match Hips to hips pressed tight in dance No other moves but fearless thrust Moans and groans a steady hush and rush Eyes lock as hands fit in clasps Silence shattered by pulsing heights Mirrored actions in talking attraction Absorbed we be loving rhythmically Tongues fencing clashing reaction Deeply she feels her loving of thee Climax reach they fall to deep Still entwined soaking sweet and sweat No other words but I love you they said As 'til death do us part, both do pledge . ©O. E. Guillermo and J.A. Fraser 14.30pm, February 28, 2015

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Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/5/2015 1:29:00 AM

Sexy! Hot! Wow nice collabo! Def a 7!!

James Fraser
Date: 3/5/2015 12:49:00 PM

Thank you kindly Njeri, writing with Olive is an absolute joy, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/1/2015 4:35:00 AM

weee indeed long while we collaborated James.. :D!!! Sparks seems to blaze when we do write, no relations to science but perhaps we do have chemistry.. :)!! Your lines tickles my mind to write such... I so enjoyed writing with you though at times it made me blush!!! ^_^?^_^ Warm hugs my poetry partner with blue eyes, James.. :) //olive eloisa

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/5/2015 1:31:00 AM

I feel like am eavesdropping: ). But i like what am hearing...

James Fraser
Date: 3/1/2015 7:54:00 AM

Warm hugs back at you poetry partner ;-) chemistry in writing we have, and I love the sparks we ignite with our writes. Have a blessed Sunday Olive, hugs aplenty, James xx :-) xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/28/2015 12:36:00 PM

such a peak experience.. cheers to you prince and eloi.. desirable!.. huggs

James Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 1:05:00 PM

Thank you Princess, it's an absolute joy writing with Olive. Hugs, James :) :)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/28/2015 9:36:00 AM

Beautiful...could be a honeymoon

James Fraser
Date: 2/28/2015 10:37:00 AM

Hiya Tim, indeed it could be. Have a lovely Saturday, James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/28/2015 8:42:00 AM

Wow passion pours from your pens - Olive and James this has such vivid imagery - fabulous write:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 10:50:00 AM

The connection of minds shows when you write together this flows so seamlessly it is stunning. Get well wishes to your friend too:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 2/28/2015 10:29:00 AM

Thank you Jan, it's been a while since we wrote a poem together. I so enjoy writing with Olive, we appear to click which makes us smile a lot. Have a lovely Saturday evening. I'm visiting my best friend this evening, he suffered a double heart attack 6 weeks ago, so it's time for a catch up about much ;-) hugs, James xx