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Mirror of Alzheimer

Mirror of Alzheimer I boarded the scheduled train I got down in the desired station. The rush led me down the road. Now I was confused. Wherere should I go? I couldn't recollect the address of my destination. I walked and walked and walked Street networks looked ike a maze. I started to analyse. Where would I like to go? Was it my working place? But how could it be! I left job long years back. Was I going to visit my parents? I knew the right direction. I walked and walked and walked Street networks looked like a maze. Was I out to see my favorite cousin? I knew the directions so well. I walked and walked and walked Street networks seemed to be a maze. I left the idea of going any where Better to be back to my own home I walked and walked and walked,. Street networks turned a maze. I could not recollect my own address. I was totally lost. 11/21/15 Re-edited on 03/28/22 First Place - 'A Brian Strand 1098 Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 3/31/2022 7:17:00 AM
Painful, Poignant, Piercing. A horrific ailment indeed, graphically amplified by your potent pen
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Date: 3/30/2022 12:22:00 AM
Terrible situation. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/28/2015 2:48:00 PM
Anisha, Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Tammy's contest. <3 ForEver SKAT
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Date: 11/27/2015 8:36:00 AM
nice one Anisha.. but is it a maze of a maize?! Congrats on the win..God bless :)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/27/2015 11:17:00 AM
Sorry,I was about to correct the spelling, just missed. I am editing just now.
Date: 11/26/2015 11:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win Anisha! Thank you for entering into my contest.
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Date: 11/21/2015 11:43:00 AM
This poem is well written and presents the viewpoint of a woman experiencing a flood of confusing emotions while dealing with the effects of Alzheimer's in her life. Emile.
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:22:00 AM
Nice write. Very sad subject covered. Good luck!
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