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Mirror, Mirror

Have you a philosophy? Look into the mirror now. Is that who you want to be? Smile or Frown will tell.

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 1/29/2016 12:23:00 PM

Short and sweet gem inviting us to partake.

Dan Cwiak
Date: 2/9/2016 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Iris. I appreciate your comments and taking the time to read.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2016 10:33:00 PM

Dan, Nice winning poem, Love - LINDA -

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/27/2016 12:31:00 AM

Thanks, Linda. I always appreciate your stopping to comment on my meager words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2016 3:52:00 PM

Nicely done, and congrats.

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/22/2016 10:59:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I appreciate your comments.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/20/2016 9:47:00 AM

Great philosophical wisdom in so few words, Dan. Congrats on your win! Sandra

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/20/2016 3:20:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra. I could not have done it without my trusty mirror. I appreciate your comments and stopping to read.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/18/2016 6:25:00 PM

After reading, I checked to see it's placement because it is so right-on! Mine was a metaphor for people that everyone thought was literally about colors! I thought it was pretty good, so I was surprised. This is truly lines of wisdom that can sustain and live long after a contest ... CayCay

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/19/2016 2:08:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words, CayCay. Everyday is different for me when I look in the mirror. As for yours, I liked it. Most people probably overlooked the metaphor because you don't see blue or green people. Sometimes we just have to be hit over the head to get it.

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 9:07:00 AM

Dan, Congratulations on your win. ---SKAT :)

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/18/2016 11:13:00 AM

Thanks, SKAT. Your comments are always appreciated.

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 1/15/2016 7:47:00 PM

short and sweet

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/16/2016 12:00:00 AM

Thanks, Gwen. Only sweet if you like what you see in the mirror. I appreciate your comments very much.