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There are three keys, my love, to this body, And those keys are called mind, heart and soul; All three keys you will need if you want my story, It will be a tangled road, a long, long uphill stroll. And those keys are called mind, heart and soul, The first will unlock the vast corridors of my mind; It will be a tangled road, a long, long uphill stroll, Dwell my love and be amazed at what you find. The first will unlock the vast corridors of my mind, The next key is to my heart, my broken heart; Dwell- my love and be amazed at what you find, My love, hold this pain I keep and never depart. The next key is to my heart, my broken heart, The last is to my soul, fall into a deep blue ocean; My love, hold this pain I keep and never depart, Now, you know, my all and each and every emotion. The last key is to my soul, fall into a deep blue ocean, All three keys you will need if you want my story; Now- you know my all and each and every emotion, There are three keys my love . . . to this body. _____________________________ July 4, 2016 Poetry/Pantoum/Mind, Heart, Soul- Body Copyright Protected, ID 16-806-235-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Three Keys sponsor, John Lawless Fifth Place

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Date: 7/23/2016 4:44:00 PM
congrats all the way, dear constance.. huggs
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Date: 7/23/2016 4:56:00 AM
Wow!!! This is really brilliant!!! Congrats BW, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/22/2016 2:39:00 PM
Congrata well written great poem x
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Date: 7/21/2016 12:18:00 PM
Mind,heart and soul-what a beautiful interpretation of keys Broken,many congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:15:00 AM
Great write BW! I must say this is one of your best! Congratulations and continue using the power of your words! :)
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Date: 7/21/2016 8:14:00 AM
Hi BW, You penned a touching and heartfelt write. Congrats on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/20/2016 5:48:00 PM
Lovely and deep as always, Constance. Congratulations on your excellent placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/20/2016 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful write, Constance, 3 keys leading to a great reward, just a well constructed, easy flowing write, in a difficult form also. Well done!
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Date: 7/20/2016 1:57:00 PM
BW, thanks for submitting this Pantoum to the contest. Well Done with the tricky form. Flowed easily and repetitions blended nicely.
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Date: 7/6/2016 5:51:00 AM
A delightful way of approaching this theme, Constance:)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/6/2016 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so much ~
Date: 7/5/2016 4:15:00 PM
Keys are safer than passwords. Fantastic writing and definitely original. Poets can go places others do not even dream of. they maybe even awaken the souls of others. David from NZ
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Constance La France
Date: 7/6/2016 9:35:00 AM
David thanks for visiting with the great comment, appreciate ~
Date: 7/5/2016 9:41:00 AM
This is perfect!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/6/2016 9:35:00 AM
Richard thanks for the visit ~

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