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Midnight Pearl

When ships set sail upon the sea Exploring ancient world They'd move by how the stars align And use the midnight pearl By day they'd use a compass to Determine East and West At night they brought the sextant out To chart the course that's best The Captain stood behind the wheel Enjoying peaceful waves Confident the moon and stars Would guide him on his way But sometimes when the storms would rage And ocean waves would roll The Captain and the crew would pray That Neptune takes no toll Then all at once the seas subside And clouds would break and wane The midnight pearl would then shine through To show the way again Randy (Rockman) Pritts 4/17/2012 For the contest by Russel Sivey

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Date: 4/27/2012 9:12:00 AM
A great story told very well. Should do well in the contest.
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:17:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed my poem, Rockman. I don't have any writing skills- it's all a gift from the Holy Spirit. I never know from line to line what I will write. I enjoyed this poem of yours - good luck with Russel's contest. Cheer, Maureen
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Date: 4/22/2012 5:57:00 AM
Hi Rockman, I'm with Gwendolen. This is a winner! Beautiful! Good luck Randy ...Samia
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Date: 4/18/2012 9:12:00 PM
Great Job, I enjoy this as well. Thank you for your commits.
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Date: 4/17/2012 4:29:00 PM
Well,,,,,all bets are off on my entry!! ah ha...this one is laced with beauty and drizzled with metaphors galore! Best of luck..I knew you'd write of the sea..you are home there! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:37:00 AM
Great write..Thank you for sharing, this gem.
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Date: 4/17/2012 1:42:00 AM
Awsome write and metaphor Randy!! love it ...oh the sea...sail on!! Well done...I will have to revisit this one again... :) good luch in the contest, big hugs, love deb
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