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Midnight Magic- Haiku Trilogy

Rainbow colored hues Encircle the gypsy moon who flirts with the night She teases the stars Coyly peeks through the dream clouds Blinding radiance I gaze in wonder Mesmerized by the display Of midnight magic

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/14/2014 6:59:00 PM

I concur with my earlier statement, you are one of the most talented poets here at the soup. Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/15/2014 6:49:00 AM

Your post brings me warmth and sunshine. It's cloudy outside. Thank you for this lovely visit, my dear. Your mother also dropped by encouraging me to come back. That was so sweet of her. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/15/2014 7:26:00 AM

I'm glad you listened to Ahsan and kept writing. The quality and breadth of your work has been extrodinary. You are truly one of the strongest talents here at the soup.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/15/2014 7:33:00 AM

Richard. ... Thanks for visiting. You being joy.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/29/2012 12:10:00 PM

Wow, you have weaved these haiku's together wondrously .

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/29/2012 12:30:00 PM

Thanks, Jon. Kind of you! I stood beneath the moonlight a few nights ago and was amazed by the beauty. You could say I was moonstruck! :) Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Always appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2012 3:27:00 PM

I love this one, especially the first two. personification in haiku rocks!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/28/2012 9:35:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Personification is great! Have a good evening!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/28/2012 10:24:00 AM

It is lovely written, Eileen - well done !!! - I wish you a nice day. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/28/2012 10:32:00 AM

Thanks, Anne Lise. Two nights ago the power was off in my area of Beirut. After I got out of the car, I looked up at the sky. It was a splendid sight. The moon was full...there were white billowly clouds that set off the moon's multi-colored halo. I stood and stared for a while. I tried to capture it here, but who can capture God's creation perfectly. Thanks for your note!