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Green In Spring

A coastline laps with glistening waves Dotted with light from its shore-bed unseen, While fragrance of air and gull’s trill filter Through leafy boughs varnished in shamrock green. How this breathtaking view warms my senses Where tinted sands like nuggets of a jade, Beguile dreamy feet to tap, to tiptoe On lime stones, pebbles, daintily arrayed. From fibrils of tides the woven moss rides That gently, evening drapes the isle with ease Softer the ripples in patterns that hold A verdant calm between water and trees Endowing new March a treasure’s delight That rails this juncture, bright as emerald… And I, a lucky charm of this fresh luster Delight in the gush bearing spring’s reward. (Get into the spirit and Go Green) Old/ New Poems Contest, PD Linda Resubmitted: 3/18/2016

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Date: 3/27/2016 4:42:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful write. This one goes into my faves....Vlad.
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Date: 3/27/2016 6:09:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, well deserved
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Date: 3/27/2016 5:06:00 AM
Great content in great rhyme. Congratulations...
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Date: 3/27/2016 1:16:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your Going Green Win. Stop by my blog "OH NO, OH NO (it's me again) drop a smile if you like :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/7/2015 11:17:00 PM
Nette, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 6/7/2015 2:36:00 PM
You have painted a most beautiful picture, of emerald impressions ! Lovely, Nette !
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Date: 6/7/2015 1:07:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/27/2015 5:54:00 AM
Wow...I feel the rush! Such beautiful poetry about the theme, Nette. I do not have an entry for this contest, but this has inspired me to try something for the others again. Thank you. Hugs! Kim :)
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Date: 3/26/2015 11:11:00 PM
Nette, I loved that last part I am nature of this fresh luster, .... you have such a way with words!! Thanks for your contests too. they fill up so quickly. wish I had more time these days!!
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Date: 3/26/2015 8:18:00 PM
http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/soon_to_be_poem_of_the_day_657237 I keep thinking about the terrible German plane crash and all of the people who won't get a chance to enjoy April. How sad. If you get a chance read my poem regarding it and comment on it. Jim Horn
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Date: 3/25/2015 8:50:00 AM
a tranquil scene of wondrous beauty Nette gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 3/24/2015 9:26:00 PM
as one who lives near the ocean I've seen the coastline you write about.It is truly peaceful and beautiful no matter what part of the world it is seen. good luck in the contest
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Date: 3/24/2015 6:35:00 PM
pssst, the word green must be in the title, you can always remove it later
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Date: 3/24/2015 4:13:00 PM
Wow, such luminous imagery, and a pleasure to read. Loved, loved it! Best wishes in the contest, Nette. Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:48:00 PM
I feel as if I'm walking around the countryside in Ireland. Beautiful images abound through your words Princess. Wishing you all the best in Francine,s contest, hugs//James :) :)
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:48:00 PM
Absolutely delightful Nette - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:29:00 PM
- A dance of spring delights in beautiful April - Wonderful poem, Nette - I wish you best of luck in the contest - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2015 2:27:00 PM
Speaking of luster, this magnificent poem is one jewel shining through your liquid pen. Will fave this spring celebration!
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Date: 3/24/2015 12:52:00 PM
Lovely write. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/24/2015 12:51:00 PM
Fantastic colors and expression Nette! Always, Keith:-)
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