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Michelangelo's Pietà

A portrayal of stricken grief, Chiseled divinely in polished stone. Cold from the touch of time. Her youthful face slightly leans, Over the lifeless body of Christ, As he drapes her anguished knees. Face to face...life and death, Cradled in her arm...she laments. Virginal impressions shadow human suffering. Her face emanates sweet serenity, And majestic acceptance of immense sorrow, While cloaked with her faith in the Redeemer. Glossy features of peace and tranquility, Balance a mother’s season of pain. Seemingly...the rose of resurrection is about to bloom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/30/2009 2:10:00 PM
sorrowfull...sigh Light & Love
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Date: 12/28/2009 8:10:00 AM
Awesome description, Raul! For me, this was even better than the other one I read of yours about Michelangelo's work. Is this in some contest? Good luck then. (just what I gathered from reading some of the comments below) . andrea
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Date: 12/26/2009 5:50:00 PM
Thankxxx for enjoying my Comments epigram.. specifically written for a new poet who has been brandishing a very cocky attitude towards certain poets on this site.. sorry for him.. he is missing the point of enjoying all kinds of poetry... thankxxx Raul.. u are a gifted and respected poet and I luv reading your poetry always... blessings.. luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/26/2009 5:38:00 AM
Superb piece Raul, golly we would have struggled if the contest was someone elses, and you entered this poem >> James
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Date: 12/26/2009 4:38:00 AM
What a wonderful poem on The Deposition u sponsored ... this would have been a top prize winner Raul as your expressions of the scene are quite visual.. emotional... deeply touching... hope your Christmas was enjoyable for u and your family... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/25/2009 10:28:00 PM
A piece of art sculptured in verses..excellent--Charma
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Date: 12/23/2009 12:35:00 AM
Well carved out too Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.May your talent blossom in many newdirections in 2010
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Date: 12/22/2009 8:58:00 PM
Wonderful interpretation, Raul! Goes to my favs. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/22/2009 8:00:00 AM
You have captured the beauty in a way we had all hoped we could, while entering your contest! Indeed, a masterpiece, as Elaine has said! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/22/2009 6:01:00 AM
Another masterpiece! Lainie
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:56:00 AM
Amazed at your talent, another one of your excellent pieces on display here. A.W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/22/2009 1:48:00 AM
This work is elegant...loving...driven by faith. Thanks for sharing.
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