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Memories - Laughter explodes, runs riot children huddled beneath sheets, heads lost in wonderland of white. Grown-ups with whispered words wait, breath held tight, at top of the stairs, passed mid-night. Eyes closed, flushed cheeks, presents laid at silent feet, on coverlets bathed by moonlight. All quiet, all through the night, until morning brings Christmas Day’s delight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/9/2012 3:39:00 PM
A well deserved win poem, congratulations!!!! -A poem to be proud of, very well written Gloria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/12/2012 8:10:00 AM
Many thanks Anne, happy that you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 12/9/2012 11:04:00 AM
awesome poem..Congratulations on your win friend Gloria. cheers!!
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/9/2012 11:12:00 AM
Many thanks Gloria
Date: 12/8/2012 6:53:00 AM
congrats Gloria on a tremendous write and win luv ..
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/9/2012 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Linda Gloria
Date: 12/8/2012 5:50:00 AM
Big Congratulations Gloria xx
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/9/2012 11:14:00 AM
Thanks - very much unexpected Gloria
Date: 12/7/2012 10:48:00 PM
I LOVE this one. So simple and yet it tells so much of those old memories. Congrats on your win.
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/9/2012 11:14:00 AM
Many thanks Andrea
Date: 12/7/2012 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations! The first three lines invoke the sweetest nostalgia - Oh, to be a kid again! This is a fabulous poem.
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/9/2012 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Heather, agreed it was a good time, much to remeber.
Date: 12/7/2012 8:59:00 PM
Gloria, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING POEM~LINDA
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/9/2012 11:16:00 AM
Many thanks
Date: 12/7/2012 6:35:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/9/2012 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Debbie
Date: 12/2/2012 2:50:00 AM
Gloria just brilliant...David
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/2/2012 8:11:00 AM
Thanks David, still a vivid memory from childhood when we were 6 in the bed , top and bottom - over Christmas at my Grandmother's house.
Date: 12/1/2012 11:05:00 AM
Lovely write this, thanks for sharing it xx
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Gloria Watts
Date: 12/2/2012 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Mandy, still avery vivid memory.

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