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Jack Horne Her dark eyes So intense When we met Those dark eyes Passionate Spoke of love Angry eyes Flashing fire As she left Senryu for Eyes First Meet

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2011 2:34:00 PM

Jack, please let me know if I have missed any of your poems. I so enjoy reading them. This was just as intense on the second reading. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2011 10:32:00 AM

Reads like a winner for sure...I got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and the kind review of my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 5:46:00 AM

Good Luck Jack on your entry collaboration with Gert .. a fabulous piece of poetry my friend.. u also can post it and enter it for credit according to Lay's rules now.. good luck to u both for a super write ...luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2011 2:19:00 PM

Looking for that limerick, Jack. Let me know when you post it! Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2011 12:00:00 PM

Oooh, her eyes went from intense and passionate to angry so quickly, Jack! Love can be fickle sometimes, eh? Great entry for Michael's contest. As for your question, both you and Gert need to post the entire poem and enter it separately. Otherwise, the sponsor will be confused. Please let Gert know. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2011 6:38:00 AM

GREAT Jack..looks very good luv.. again good luck ... happy weekend too...

Stephen Parker

Date: 3/25/2011 6:08:00 PM

Her piercing eyes had you at first laser beam. You were metaphorically and then physically smitten. Nice job of sequencing the relationship.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2011 2:32:00 PM

Oh, wow, I love how you went to beginning of relationship, middle and then end! good play!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/25/2011 2:08:00 PM

Nice surpirsing twist at the end, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/25/2011 1:40:00 PM

Oh Jack such emotion in your Senryu.. is it for Michael's contest luv? need your name at top and contest name and poetry form on bottom if so luv.. good luck and happy weekend ...