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Memoir of An African-American Man, Achievement, I

Achievement, 1 of 2 —Time to share— I grew up in a slum where the gang members, at the risk of their lives, fight over their turf. My lullaby was red and blue warning lights flickering from dashing squared cars and ambulances, and my bedtime story was the blow of sirens passing through the streets and alleys between boarded up abandoned houses standing in rows here and there. My mother, though loved me dearly, happened to be a high school dropout and single who brought this world to me at her teens. She was a minimum wage earner, therefore, her life was nothing but struggles, kept body and soul together in misery between laid off to employed to laid off, between paycheck to welfare to paycheck that is thinner than a sheet of paper. Although under educated, she was a pious woman, and that is why her keen desire was not her son to follow the steps of her mistake and suffer like his mother. Her wish was to raise her only child to be a decent citizen with a noble profession and thereby add some value to the community, return some good things to the society. Apart from mother’s great expectation, however, I was a disobedient rogue child, a kind of problem kid on the block when I was a lad. I got into bad company and led astray by them, was irregular in attendance to a school and cut classes whenever I felt like. Until one day I learned of my mother’s tragic death on the way back home from her work, she was struck by a stray bullet in the midst of gang members cross fire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/8/2016 2:22:00 PM
Dear Su, you touched my heart with this very poignant piece! It's so sad that your wonderful mother was taken in such a tragic way! Excellent write and a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Su Ben
Date: 2/9/2016 2:16:00 PM
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Su Ben
Date: 2/9/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, you are warm hearted real person, su
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/9/2016 11:44:00 AM
The fact that I was able to feel and react the way I did, to the emotions/tragedies expressed through this piece, is a testament of how good you are about empathizing/imagining yourself in the place of those who are actually experiencing such a life in the concrete jungle. Pandita
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Su Ben
Date: 2/8/2016 6:53:00 PM
Thank you for your expression of condolence. I don't want to disappoint you but it's my imaginal fiction. su

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