Memoir From Paradise

On dappled hill I stand Flowers at its command, Trees blazing like Lakshmi star With essence, breath in awe. Fireflies rustling, aglow; This paradise, near than far Where swan flits low To prepare dawn’s tableau, All these, locked in sweet memoir. ------ Ballasi Stanza Contest by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/18/2013 9:32:00 PM
Congratulations Nette!
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Date: 12/18/2013 9:49:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 12/15/2013 3:43:00 PM
Pleased to see you here Nette, and all the best congratulations.."
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Date: 12/15/2013 12:27:00 PM
A very nice poem Nette, Your writing is so good...Hugs...Roger
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Date: 12/15/2013 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations nette xx
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Date: 12/15/2013 8:24:00 AM
Very sweet Nette, congrats. P.S. I featured you in my most recent poem.
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Date: 12/15/2013 3:54:00 AM
All these are heavenly.Nature is a memoir from paradise.Your title and the poem matches very well.Each and every nature's beauty is from GOD.In other words from Paradise.Great work nette.Excellent,Marvelous.Congratulations.Love you.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:55:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays. Light & Love
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:47:00 PM
Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, nette
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Date: 12/5/2013 11:33:00 PM
This is an enlightening write, very powerful poem! I may not be on much for about week, I'm having problems with my teeth, big pain, I can't seem to get anyone to really help me...I always have to wait until they have an opening for me to get in even if it is an Emergency! So I must wait until Monday, and I am in a lot of pain these days, there are at least 2 teeth that need removal...I'm afraid of having pain all through the weekend! So now think of me these few days! I'll try to get on soon!
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Date: 12/4/2013 10:53:00 PM
This brought back feelings when I was on the island of Tortolla, great piece Nette,blessings, Carl
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Date: 12/4/2013 2:55:00 AM
memoir from paradise through your pen great! wonderful poem.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/3/2013 5:25:00 PM
Love your entry to this contest. GREAT imagery and theme, Nette. A winner for sure.
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Date: 12/3/2013 9:49:00 AM
Howdy Nette! How are ya? This poem is beautiful...as always!
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Date: 12/3/2013 9:06:00 AM
I'm vaguely familiar with what you speak of here. This was another atmospheric beauty of a writing.
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Date: 12/3/2013 8:14:00 AM
We have Goddess Laxmi, the goddess of wealth and happiness, in Hindu Religion. But never knew it to be a star of that name, nette
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:51:00 AM
Great poetic quality..Enjoyed reading about the swans this morn..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:34:00 AM
This can only be quilled by one who feels and knows what the core of splendor is. To see magnificence in a snaps of a moment is admirable. A most cherished piece from paradise! Enough said.
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Date: 12/3/2013 3:42:00 AM
- Such memories ..... be wrapped with the finest paper .... A lovely poem,Nette :))) - Wish you a nice day with lots of joy! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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