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On dappled hill I stand Flowers at its command, Trees blazing like Lakshmi star With essence, breath in awe. Fireflies rustling, aglow; This paradise, near than far Where swan flits low To prepare dawn’s tableau, All these, locked in sweet memoir. ------ Ballasi Stanza Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 12/18/2013 9:32:00 PM
    Congratulations Nette!

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 9:49:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 3:43:00 PM
    Pleased to see you here Nette, and all the best congratulations.."

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 12:27:00 PM
    A very nice poem Nette, Your writing is so good...Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:30:00 AM
    Congratulations nette xx

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:24:00 AM
    Very sweet Nette, congrats. P.S. I featured you in my most recent poem.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 3:54:00 AM
    All these are heavenly.Nature is a memoir from paradise.Your title and the poem matches very well.Each and every nature's beauty is from GOD.In other words from Paradise.Great work nette.Excellent,Marvelous.Congratulations.Love you.(: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 7:55:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 7:47:00 PM
    Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, nette

  1. Date: 12/6/2013 12:28:00 PM
    I liked the rhyme far-memoir, together with the entire rhyme scheme!. Beautiful write and I wish you good luck in the contest. G.

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 11:33:00 PM
    This is an enlightening write, very powerful poem! I may not be on much for about week, I'm having problems with my teeth, big pain, I can't seem to get anyone to really help me...I always have to wait until they have an opening for me to get in even if it is an Emergency! So I must wait until Monday, and I am in a lot of pain these days, there are at least 2 teeth that need removal...I'm afraid of having pain all through the weekend! So now think of me these few days! I'll try to get on soon!

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 10:53:00 PM
    This brought back feelings when I was on the island of Tortolla, great piece Nette,blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 2:55:00 AM
    memoir from paradise through your pen great! wonderful poem.(: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 10:36:00 PM
    Nine perfect lines paint a perfectly magical picture. This is pretty.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 5:25:00 PM
    Love your entry to this contest. GREAT imagery and theme, Nette. A winner for sure.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 3:48:00 PM
    Another beautiful poem you have created here Nette. such a lovely picture you created in my mind....peter

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 9:49:00 AM
    Howdy Nette! How are ya? This poem is always!

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 9:06:00 AM
    I'm vaguely familiar with what you speak of here. This was another atmospheric beauty of a writing.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 8:58:00 AM
    This is a delight to read, Nette. Great work as always.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 8:14:00 AM
    We have Goddess Laxmi, the goddess of wealth and happiness, in Hindu Religion. But never knew it to be a star of that name, nette