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Mele melee!

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Mele melee!

Wind rushes downhill
Tearing into the orchard
Apples ev'rywhere!

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  1. Date: 12/17/2008 4:58:00 PM
    Nice haiku Nigel. I like haiku's...Raul

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 3:44:00 PM
    Hey, Nigel, let's make a pie. This haiku presents an irresistibe image. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 11:58:00 AM
    Perfect format ..... And who said " don't upset the apple-cart " ???? ....Rgds. Granny Smith ...Write onnnnnnnn , Nigel ...

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 6:27:00 AM
    Super title! Vivid imagery... perfect construction! Well done Nigel!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 6:19:00 AM
    Such a vivid picture you paint with this haiku! Along with that rush of wind, we can feel it and are there! Excellent! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 4:25:00 AM
    Great Title! That wind can be the devil, rushing in and causing chaos, then trotting back where it came, as if it was never there at all. Naughty wind. lOL Love this Haiku, my far away friend, in Wonderland. Love Me

  1. Date: 11/24/2008 3:04:00 AM
    Sounds like home to me. :) We have apples willy nilly all over VT right now! a tasty haiku. :) Love Kristin

  1. Date: 11/23/2008 7:16:00 PM
    The mood of this haiku changes for me; it's a compex mix of storm and cheer. Thanks.

  1. Date: 11/23/2008 3:45:00 PM
    Two weekend ago, we were in the foothills, in an area called Apple Hill. And yes....the wind blew the apples off the trees, and there were apples ev'rywhere!! But it sure did smell good! Love your haiku, Nigel!! A nice fall feeling to it! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 11/23/2008 2:42:00 PM
    As you may have noticed, haiku is one of my favorite forms of poetry. Wind is one of my favorite elements (second only to rain), and this haiku describes it so well. I love the image of "apples ev'rywhere"!