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Melancholy Memory

I heard the sad news, just as the radio played our Jim Croce' song.... Did they know?.... ... It became our song,.... the spring we turned fifteen.... and gave us an excuse.... to be close... You were so patient sharing your guitar, and teaching me about frets strings, the bridge My fingertips sore, you took my hand in yours.. gently rubbed and, kissed them one by one Did we know young love only has one season? 'Time In A Bottle' was all we had

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/8/2013 11:21:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Congrats. Brings back memories for me. I listened to Jim Croce and I was 15 an in love and lost my boyfriend in an accident. Thank you.
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Date: 6/6/2013 8:47:00 PM
nice win...linda
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:35:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved placement. Glad to see it on the list. AO
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Date: 6/5/2013 7:24:00 PM
Carrie congratulations super win warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/4/2013 5:05:00 PM
Sad memories Carrie. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2013 11:54:00 AM
Love this one Carrie!beautifully penned.
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Date: 5/18/2013 10:00:00 AM
Love this take. Well done. AO
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Date: 5/18/2013 7:15:00 AM
Oh my gosh Carrie...I just got goose bumps....winner...awesome
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Date: 5/18/2013 6:28:00 AM
Memories: Our dearest and most loyal companions no matter what! Beautiful!
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