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Melancholia-A Tanka Verse

a confined abyss dis ease,born of despair- early morning mist evanescing in new light-giving care You may hear me recite this tanka verse and much of my PS poetry on youtube under my pen name ichthyschiro

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Date: 9/1/2015 9:50:00 AM
This is filled with such a serious tone, yet captures a brilliant sense of melancholy! Well done, Brian!
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/1/2015 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Carrie.please see slipknot mentioned above.reds Brian

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