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Meeses In Pieces!

Ole Blackie the cat lapped his chin his Ma had put milk out ag'in he'd brought her a mouse and left it right out! she saw it and screamed, then ran in!

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Robin Davis

Date: 12/9/2013 6:24:00 PM

Debbie Such a cute and funny write. Kitties love to bring "presents" to their masters. Made me chuckle and smile. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Christmas Fun poem

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/16/2011 10:00:00 AM

I had to check out one of your limericks to get some idea of what you are looking for in your contest. This is a decently humorous one.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 11/19/2010 8:10:00 AM

Darn ugly mouse! Witty, funny, glad you are having a good day, my dear.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2010 7:09:00 PM

haha, this is darling!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2010 6:30:00 PM

Eek! This happened to me when I had my cats, Deb. They thought they were bringing me "presents," but the decapitated mice on the front porch were not appreciated. Very cute limerick! Soup mail. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2010 9:15:00 AM

OK TEACH have changed my tercet for your viewing pleasure luv.. hope this will be OK for the contest luv..

Sidney Beck

Date: 11/15/2010 1:10:00 PM

Debbie......Like it very much.....I had a cat that did the mouse-presentation thing regularly....... are you back from Egypt? was it good?......I tried to "centre" that DESK poem but couldn't get the computer to obey the instructions on the page about centring....I am no computer whizz at all !...... best wishes .......Syd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2010 12:49:00 PM

Cute,,,Cats will do that especially a young one..They bring it to the door for its master..When the cat that I have was just about half-grown she would bring me all sorts of dead things...squirrels, field rats, birds,etc..I was delighted that you read my work "The Truck Graveyard"..I want to say that I am thinking on writing one for your contest..I know that I wrote on that was that form before but I can't find it..I have some information about that style I will just have to work on it..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/15/2010 12:10:00 PM

Cute limerick. I have tried again. It is posted. Love, Joyce

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/15/2010 8:44:00 AM

very cute limerick you have here, Debbie :) I remember having a cat named Blackie when I was smaller but luckily enough it never brought us mice ;) btw super thank You! WoW! O_o you cannot believe how surprised I was with my placement in your last contest-- ^_^ super thank you for it, so honored to share it with Charles :) sure am happy that I changed it? I honestly wasn't content with my 1st version & glad I revised it-- thanks again :) -- hugs nikko :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/15/2010 7:51:00 AM

I've erased the poem. will have to try later without rhyme if I can find the time. Love, joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/14/2010 9:18:00 PM

Lovely limerick. Thanks for your help and advice. I have changed the last stanza accordingly. Hope you like it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/14/2010 6:44:00 AM

A real super cutie read early Sunday morning Debbie.. SOUP MAIL... funny picture here in your lines of humor and wit..TEACH.. pupil..luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/14/2010 5:24:00 AM

lol...a very sweet picture you have given us this Morning..enjoyed and smiled...luv Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/14/2010 2:17:00 AM

he he, enjoyed your limerick, have anice one D.g. ..always p.d.

Thvia Shetley

Date: 11/13/2010 10:31:00 PM

ha ha! Love it Deb, this one hits me close to home! I used to have a wonderful outside cat named Hunter (for good reason). Every day, without fail, he would contribute to 'feed' our family by leaving his latest kill at the front door. It wasn't pleasant to find a dead animal at my doorstep every day but, knowing what it means for a cat to do that just made me love him all the more! What a family man he was!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/13/2010 6:51:00 PM

fun limerick! Deb!....I'm happy I have brought you some inspiration!...then my poetry is for naught!...you, on the other hand, have insight that continues to amaze me! you are singular! jimbo

John Rhinem

Date: 11/13/2010 6:27:00 PM

Smile!!! ~ "Yes," if one listens very closely, they can almost hear those her screams &, I feel sorry for that tiny little innocent creation almost like, a helpless baby within its precious crib; unknowing, that beast of a kitty, was on her prowl ~ Smile, "Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Sweet Dreams!":) ~