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There I was lying in bed thinking heck what is there about me that makes me unique? That makes strangers and friends embrace me? Ah I still haven't figured it out maybe it's not supposed to be figured out I should just continue to be me the listener the one that gets you to share your hurt, your fear, your happy moments without having to wonder will she perhaps use it against me one day? So now I know why I tend to be sought after, why I sometimes feel like, I carry the world on my shoulders I am just that open vessel that some people plug into that others find unique something I never appreciated until today…
Contest: Love Me Why? 3rd Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/22/2012 4:18:00 AM
This is really a lovely poem, and I think we need more people such as yourself in this world
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:49:00 AM
good job on your win... beautiful piece
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:15:00 PM
You are our gift. And it's being just who you are, a warm hearted, caring, loving friend. XXX
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Date: 5/2/2011 3:01:00 PM
Beautiful expression... I am just open vessel ....Wilma. enjoyed it, and good luck in the contest,
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Date: 5/2/2011 1:26:00 PM
Fabulous 3rd.place win Wilma you are a good listener.Haven't been here much been waiting for a good friend to start getting well.Wanted to say thanks for all your kind comments and congrats.So you take care.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 5/2/2011 11:15:00 AM
What a great friend.
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Date: 5/2/2011 3:40:00 AM
Hey Wilma- How transparent of you to write your real feelings and then discover something new about yourself. Congrats on your HM. Appreciate your remarks on my Sixtynet piece. It was such fun to write. Happy Monday! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/1/2011 8:28:00 PM
Your soul is indeed beautiful Wilma. Many warm congrtas.
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Date: 5/1/2011 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, Wilma
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Date: 5/1/2011 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in Kristen's contest "Love Me Why"? Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2011 9:27:00 PM
Wilma, good luck in this contest.. i hope its not to late till i love me again... lol.. right now... i'm avoiding love... gees and it reflected on me... i think i dont even like peeps out here... likeing me... you guys here are my only friends... you take care.. now..p.d.
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Date: 4/30/2011 3:44:00 PM
wilma, this one was one of my VERY favorites and I am happy to see it got a high place. Incredible take on the contest.Congratulations.
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Date: 4/30/2011 11:18:00 AM
Great reason to be loved in this world of people who talk and don't listen..It is a good trait to listen really listen to people..Thanks for the kind comments about my work..Sara
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Date: 4/30/2011 8:37:00 AM
Someone who has the gift of listening to others//and helping................NICE//CONGRATS TO YOU!!!
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Date: 4/30/2011 7:58:00 AM
Thanks for your comment and even more for your friendship, Wilma. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 4/30/2011 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful, Wilma! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/30/2011 7:20:00 AM
Great to see you near the top Wilma with this great poem. Congratulations on your honored third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/30/2011 6:44:00 AM
Congrats, Wilma. Outstanding piece. Well written and well deserved win. Thanks for your kind words, my friend. Thanks for being you. You and yours have a great weekend. luv Ralph
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Date: 4/30/2011 6:19:00 AM
This Poem is a framed work of art of your inner soul.. Congrats my dear luv.... so proud to know and to write with you miss flirt...lol you knowI had t write that... love Michael
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Date: 4/30/2011 6:01:00 AM
I see a congrats is in order here dear poet !..(((((claps)))))...modestly writen Wilma, and a well deserved placement ! Have a wonderful weekend...much love, james
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Date: 4/30/2011 5:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win,well deserved :o)
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Date: 4/30/2011 5:34:00 AM
Congrats Wilma my friend on your 3rd place win in Kristen's contest with this superb write and entry luv.. enjoy another brilliant win with luv and happy weekend ...
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Date: 4/30/2011 5:16:00 AM
Wilma the confidant-congrats on your win. It is nice to be sought after yet after a while it can be a heavy load to burden. Perhaps your best trait should have been your shoulders? Broad they are! U may have meant to write supposed in lieu of suppose to show the past tense. HIgh 5 to u! Have a great weekend. gwendolen
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Date: 4/29/2011 7:08:00 PM
Excellent write here Wlma.I know what makes you unique!LOL:)--kash
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Date: 4/29/2011 4:04:00 PM
wow, I think you did it so modestly (not like me, haha) and it truly is one of THE best for the contest. So sweet how you are the one who does not go telling others' secrets. I really love that about you. Luv, Andrea
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