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Mate- Not For Contest

M ystical flaring~~~ ~~~of body and soul A lluring oneness~~~ ~~~not broken but whole T ime lies unmeasured~~~ ~~~in torrid embrace E xquisite rapture~~~ ~~~shines out from each face Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Richard D Seal

Date: 8/29/2013 5:19:00 PM

Should this not be mystical flaring, excellent follow on from your muse. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 2:44:00 AM

OK...took your advice MR Seal....mystical flaring it is! :) I wrote this one first, to be honest. I hadn't read the directions for the contest and wanted something no one would think of....AFTER I wrote it, I realize there were words to choose from so I went for MUSE. Mr. SEAL....THAT was a follow up on THIS! :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 8/28/2013 10:45:00 PM

WOW, This acrostic is awesome. The rhyme is superb and the vivid description of a mated union is simply incredible. You have outdone yourself Eileen. Of all your work that I have read this is my favorite so far. I am blown away by this poem.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 2:45:00 AM

WOW! Thanks Jon....This is lovely praise and makes me very happy! :) Glad you like this.....Hope you land on your feet soon! ;)

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/28/2013 9:24:00 PM

HI Eileen, Enjoyed this creative acrostic..Thanks for sharing.. Ken..

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 2:45:00 AM

Ken, thanks for the visit. Glad you find it enjoyable!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2013 5:21:00 PM

lovely acrostic... happy with my mate... hugs... Linda

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 2:46:00 AM

:) Glad you are...:) Thanks for the lovely visit! Hugs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2013 4:42:00 PM

Ahh!! I like this one..Enjoyed reading it this evening..Very creative..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 2:48:00 AM

:) ALWAYS a pleasure, Sara!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/28/2013 3:35:00 PM

Hi Eileen, my poem is finished now, have another look.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 2:48:00 AM

I did....I like it! :) The FINAL version! :) How did you find the words to describe that painting so well. Amazing!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2013 3:12:00 PM

ahhh, I hope your other one is as lovely!!! glad to see you get inspired by a four letter word! I read what you said in Frank's blog. it's scary what is going on and especially if it's all contrived?? Soup mail me if you know any details that are being hidden from the public. I am so curious about these things.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 2:50:00 AM

Oh dear...my husband is a news buff...He watches the news whenever he gets the chance, and the radio blares it all all night while we sleep! ;) Ok...he does have it on low, but...seriously, imagine waking up to that? Oh well, it could take pages...I will ask him for some info when he gets home and get bake to ya.

Ayesha Karim

Date: 8/28/2013 1:11:00 PM

Great poem Miss Ghali.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 2:52:00 AM

Thank you, Ayesha! :) Thanks for visiting...

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/28/2013 12:40:00 PM

Wow Eileen....maybe I should have asked for the clone of this mate instead of the muse, can I have both of them all rolled up in one? : ) This one ROCKS as well! Well done! Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 2:52:00 AM

YOU WISH!!!! Don't we all! :) Thanks every so much, Cecilia...love your uplifting posts!