Man, I Gotta Learn To Read the Rules

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They say it's French

but it feels more Machismo to me.

You know, that firm lushness

creamy smooth smushiness

moist but not to much

to whet appetite

for more

avacado.

They say it's French but it feels more Machismo to me. You know, that firm lushness creamy smooth smushiness moist but not too much to whet appetite for more avocado.

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Tony Lane

Date: 10/22/2011 7:25:00 AM

It was still good. You're back in the groove I see. Tony

Goode Guy

Date: 10/22/2011 6:56:00 AM

Nancy, i don't even know how to spell guacamole (OMG! I got it right!...1st try) but this "creamy smooth smushiness" just slips on the tongue. ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 7:34:00 PM

hehhe love it,,.p.d.

Jesu Johnson

Date: 10/21/2011 6:32:00 PM

This is a masterpiece!!!!!