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Mama and the Goodbye Man

KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK THE DOOR ALMOST FELL DOWN MY mama went with the goodbye man ALL HER CHILDREN slumbered close a hand he wouldn't think of leaving her behind we awakened and found that mama had gone a smile was all she left behind she had gone ... she went with the goodbye man by janetta

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Abe Lopez

Date: 5/17/2009 2:03:00 PM

Janetta, congrats on being featured this week!

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/16/2009 1:54:00 PM

Janetta, nice work and congrats on being featured this week...Raul

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/16/2009 9:09:00 AM

Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/12/2009 5:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Date: 5/11/2009 5:21:00 PM

Such a sad situation. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/11/2009 10:28:00 AM

Congrats Janetta on your awesome poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Daver Austin

Date: 5/11/2009 7:50:00 AM

Hi, Janetta. This is kind of Mother Goosey, and I dearly love Mother Goose, child that I am. Be that this fine poem is regarding personal tragedy, then I'm sorry to be flippant. Congrats on the pick. Love, daver

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/11/2009 7:13:00 AM

Congrats Janetta on "Mama and The Goodbye Man" being featured. God Bless. Vince

James Peranteau

Date: 5/11/2009 5:46:00 AM

Janetta,...wow,..gripping write! Congrats having it featured this week,..well deserved! james

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/10/2009 10:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem. Ernilando