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Malady of the Unknown

Stern faced and threads of meager means Hands worn and thirty Eyes that have lost their shimmer The legs that he stands on, getting thinner Striving for bread? Or really a sweet bottle of wine All in good time All in good time As he begs for a dime Crowded streets, crowed faces Most carefree in their hidden spaces Blackened nails The scent of sweat and booze They cannot bear to stare into his face No, for they fear they may wake one day in the same state- of retched disrepair Or is that they just don’t care? I wonder does he feel any hope? As he goes about jostling his carriage of left over junk Rain falls on the crowded city streets As they look down all you hear is his shuffling lonely feet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/14/2008 4:12:00 PM
He may have been a father, a brother and definitely someone's child. We are less human when we turn our heads. "Whatever you do for the least of My brethren........". This world needs people who care. God Bless. (I'm still allowed to say that until the liberals have it banned). Oh!! I'd say it anyway. God Bless. Vince P.S. Tell your daughter thank you MUCH!! Vince
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Date: 9/12/2008 8:10:00 AM
A very compassionate poem and so very well written. Love the last two lines, it lends a poignancy to the poem. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/11/2008 3:29:00 AM
So sad. They, like everyone, are all different. I do know by experience that some actually like living that way, or have grown to like it, some have gone so far inside themselves the outside world does not exists anymore, and some have lost all hope - I feel for those who feel there is no hope - so sad, love Kristin P.S-thanks for all your kind kind words! :)
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Date: 9/10/2008 11:48:00 PM
Like the contrast in the penultmate line Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 9/10/2008 3:51:00 PM
So sad to think that there are so many out there, just like the one you describe in this poem. While we sleep in warm beds, where are they? A question we need to ask more often, and do more to change what happens. Nice work for bringing in to our attention once more.! ~Carrie
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Date: 9/10/2008 3:48:00 PM
someitmes this is what a homeless person wants, sometimes it is not by his own design, some just give up hope of a better tomorrow or does not know how to start over again, nice write, take care D-nyce
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