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Make You Laugh -Part 4

God, why do you like to be in control? Why do we keep making mistakes and you keep correcting them? Aren’t you ever tired? Do we ask you too much? Have you ever put anything off? Do you always know what to do? Is everything easy for you? Why are you not a respecter of persons? Okay, God, I have asked You way too much It is time for me to talk to you normally God, what did you do yesterday? Can’t do that Here I am asking you again Okay where have you been lately? What places have you been to? What – I can’t say anything without asking You What is the deal? God, do you like staying here with us? And help us? God, You are the greatest Father anyone can have And you would do anything for us Love you so much God Glad you never leave Thank you Father Love you, your daughter Toquyen

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Date: 5/24/2012 12:03:00 PM
Lol. Send it my way and God will pay it. Lol. He sure will. Love, Toquyen
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:24:00 AM
Toquyen, I think you will get a HUGE phone bill from "The sky Bank" - ......lol......Amen! - Very well written!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/23/2012 9:54:00 PM
T.H., lots of thoughts, ... thank you for sharing... good night..pd
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/24/2012 5:52:00 AM
Thank you PD. Have a good morning now :) Toquyen
Date: 5/23/2012 7:52:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem tonight, thank you for sharing.
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/23/2012 7:54:00 PM
Thank you Joann :) Glad you like it. Toquyen

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