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Make You Laugh - Part 1

God, I believe I can say anything and it will make you laugh So here I go God, when we say “I love you” Do you want to hear it softly or yelled? God, when we are in trouble Do you want us to wait until we are in the corner Or you want to call to you at the start? God, do you like staying here on earth or in heaven? God, do you prefer men or women? Do you ever grow old? What does your house look like? Do you come to earth in back and forth trips? Do you wear clothes? How did you get your talents? Do you need people around you? Do you go to the bathroom? Are you running late and your hair gets disheveled? Do you ever make appointments? Do you get a sick or not feeling well feeling? What do you want to do for fun? Do you play football? Do you eat? Do you have an animal? Do you meet people? God, there are so much I want to ask you But until next time I love you God, you are the best I hope I made you laugh Love, your daughter Toquyen

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Date: 5/27/2012 2:21:00 AM
You questions seem to be searching to find out if God is human as each of these questions are human traits. A unique perspective here. Huggs TLee
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/27/2012 6:27:00 AM
GOD is everything. I think He can be human too. Love, Toquyen
Date: 5/25/2012 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Judy. That is what I live by -the Holy Bible. I had asked God to make it a part of me. And He did. I really love it. Love, Toquyen
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Date: 5/24/2012 9:18:00 AM
I think GOD would respond, "Toquyen, you'll find your answers in the good Book!" Thanks....enjoyed.....
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Date: 5/22/2012 6:49:00 AM
Well written Toquyen - oxox Anne-Lise.....part 2 next
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Date: 5/21/2012 11:26:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Toquyen. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/21/2012 7:51:00 PM
Thanks Carol for reading my poems. That's why I am here for. Love, Toquyen
Date: 5/21/2012 7:48:00 AM
If GOD didn't laugh, I am doing it for HIM,but I know HE is, so we are laughing together
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/21/2012 7:50:00 PM
Thank you Richard. I am glad God laugh. He is great and funny too! Love, Toquyen
Date: 5/20/2012 4:02:00 PM
wonderful poem, i am sure god smiles over you when he reads this. Great poem Ronny
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 5/20/2012 4:32:00 PM
Thanks Ronny. Toquyen

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