Magical-Snowy Dust

Three Christmas wishes That I sent to Santa Claus: Happiness to stay The sounds of children laughing Friends and family all day – What was my surprise? An ornament on the tree Sparkling robust. Its tiny door and windows Held magical-snowy dust – With eyes opened wide, I gleaned wisdom from his note. “Happiness shall stay, Joy shall fill your loving heart Compassions-service each day!” © December 26, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: SANTA'S SURPRISE" Sponsor Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/10/2012 2:25:00 PM

Congrats on this winning write, Dane Anne. I hope this note finds u well. Your compassion for friends and family is hard to hide in this Christmas poem. Congrats. Have a wonderful New Year...hang out a lil more as your time allows. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/10/2012 5:08:00 AM

Congratulations on you win in Linda-Marie's "Santa's Surprise contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/10/2012 2:20:00 AM

Love it Anne, well done x

Jon Arno

Date: 1/9/2012 10:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your great write. Best regards, Jon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2012 8:24:00 PM

wowie, Dane Ann. One of the very best and I didn't even know it was here before seeing the winners' list. a MUCH deserved win. Congratulations.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/9/2012 1:24:00 PM

A real beauty this, Dane Ann! Congratulations on your winning poem!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2012 10:04:00 AM

CONGRATS ON FIRST PLACE DANE ANN WITH THIS STUNNING ENTRY ...

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 1/9/2012 12:37:00 PM

Thank you VERY MUCH for choosing me for a first place win. You made my day! Big Smiles. Love to you...still thinking of your son often. How is he? Stateside, yet?

Kash Poet

Date: 12/31/2011 10:32:00 PM

Very nice write here Dane Ann.Wish you a very very Happy New Year.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2011 8:02:00 AM

Thank you for sharing it Linda-Marie - lovely. OXOX Love Anne-Lise

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/26/2011 9:22:00 AM

I am so glad you enjoyed my poem, Anne Lise. I hope that Linda-Marie likes it as well. Thank you for taking precious time to read and comment. I appreciate you. Sincerely, Dane Ann