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M I R R O R S Mimic-A Pantoum

We mirrors mimic emotions, we know when you are sad, your emotions are vast oceans, for your pain we feel bad. We know when you are sad, we sigh for your invisible sigh, for your pain we feel bad, we are truthful, we never lie. We sigh for your invisible sigh, your anger, realms of regrets, we are truthful, we never lie, so throw regrets, mind's threats. Your anger, realms of regrets, your emotions are vast oceans, so throw regrets, mind's threats We mirrors mimic emotions. April 1, 2016. A Pantoum A Poet's Choice - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 4/7/2016 3:35:00 PM
Hi Meenakshi, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Ane emotional Pantoum....Mike.
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Date: 4/6/2016 2:13:00 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with this superb poem Meenakshi..
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Date: 4/4/2016 6:36:00 PM
Meenaskshi, congratulations on your win! The reason for the HM is because the last stanza is to read as 7. 3. 8. 1. Your emotions are vast oceans 3. Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/4/2016 8:27:00 PM
You did a great job !
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 4/4/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thanks Eve for letting me know....it was my first poem in Pantoum...and I will make the correction.
Date: 4/4/2016 5:15:00 PM
many congrats on your HM win Meenaskshi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 4/4/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thank you...

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