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M.I.A. There’s a space, next to me Where he, used to be There’s a cot, waiting for Him to walk through the door And the guys gather round To hear if he’s been found He’s missing We were young, we had heart And we knew, from the start Going home, was the deal If only that were real And the guys gather round To hear if he’s been found Still missing Then up, goes the list Of those, who don’t exist The heaven’s, open wide Accept the human tide And the guys gather round Young and strong and proud Line that hole in the ground No longer…… missing………. Just….. Missed For Crosses in Your Eyes Contest

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Date: 3/1/2016 10:08:00 AM
This one touches me, Richard, in many ways. Beautifully rendered. Human tide... profound, that. I stopped by to let you know that I have put up a content summary of "Microscopic Windfall" by Earl Mitchell, as you requested. I'm a gal of my word. I said I would. And I did. I am glad I chose this particular poem page to tap you on the shoulder. Soulful piece. Soul filled. Peace. ;) Cyndi
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Date: 10/10/2015 5:38:00 AM
Wow Richard. This is a very powerful poem that touched my heart. This thought provoking 7 will go into my favorites. Thanks for sharing my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:49:00 AM
Hey, Richard, this is Petal saying another big thanks to you for visiting my poetry, and I am dying to see a new one from YOU.
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Date: 8/29/2015 9:11:00 AM
A moving piece Richard!
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Date: 8/28/2015 1:44:00 PM
intriguing in a wonderful way...the spaces along the lines are effective tools to mark important pauses...splendid, richard1.. huggs
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Date: 8/22/2015 11:34:00 AM
Such a sad and emotional write, Richard...raised goosebumps for sure. Also, congratulations on your placement in Justin's contest. Sandra
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Date: 8/19/2015 9:40:00 PM
thanks for reading my poem tonight. I wonder if there are any of your poems I have not read yet!! I still think this here poem is one of the best I have seen from you, Richard!
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Date: 8/3/2015 3:47:00 PM
A very effective and emotionally relevant piece. I see as well that congratulations are in order. Take care Rich.
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Date: 8/1/2015 9:48:00 PM
I bet you got a high score. I can see you got congrats. So BIG congrats to YOU on a well deserved win.
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thoughtful, intriguing, good ending.
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Date: 7/29/2015 12:21:00 AM
You have the resolute voice of someone who was there. This makes the piece even more poignant. Congratulations, Richard
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Date: 7/28/2015 5:56:00 PM
Your write speaks eloquent in the heart of the readers, this precious write is intriguing. Excellent..good luck.......A.M.
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Date: 7/26/2015 10:12:00 PM
WOW, now I am seeing how YOU did crosses in your eyes. I think I am not an abstract person. I doubt I would have ever just been able to take off on the topic the way you did and end up with this kind of amazing poem!!! (sure hope he places YOU on his list, the last line is outstanding)
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Date: 7/26/2015 9:55:00 PM
Very heart felt, Richard. Very sad. One of your best. That ending stanza and line really got to me. I'm glad you are posting again. You are so talented.....
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Date: 7/26/2015 6:51:00 PM
Wow Richard.... I take it you're a vet. Very powerful. Good luck with the contest. As far as I'm concerned you are a contender. Best regards, Howard
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Date: 7/26/2015 8:53:00 AM
Oh Richard this brought a lump to my throat - superb take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
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