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Lying In Bed

Tap, tap, tap on my window, pat, pat, pat falls the rain. Subdued light filters through the smooth fabric of the curtains. Low rumbling of distant thunder soothes my brain. Outside I spy the night garden, the moon flowers beckoning, the rain's tear drops gently drip from their pink and white petals. The crimson bougainvillea hugs tightly to the arbors where they cling. Softly the glow of the moon peeks through wisps of dreams wafting slowly by casting sanguine shadows, specters of my cloudy thoughts, the dilemma of the darkness inside of me, the hidden pain I cry. Lying in bed, thinking, never a good thing to do. The night seems so endless, so eternally lonely, lost in my senses, eyes closed and weary, my thoughts turn to you. What happened, who can say, all that matters is you are not here. No anger, nothing, like a ghost in the mist you just disappeared, without a word, without a goodbye, without so much as a tear. It's been so long since we've spoken, the image of your face slowly fading. Only your essence remains, your emerald green eyes, the curve of your neck, your gentle touch, memories of you over time slowly degrading. Yet, at night, thoughts of you still linger, you seem so distant, so foreign, but dawn breaks the dark and the garden rests, as do I in a hazy slumber. Through the fog I see myself picking a flower, a Fairy Iris, for Lauren.
09/02/15

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Date: 9/5/2015 12:07:00 AM
Did I tell you, if I do this challenge,I am gonna have to write some kind of Xmas poem. Almost all my first five poems were Christmas titles. hahaha. gosh, have I seen all your poems? I may have. Thanks so much for seeing mine today. I will try to find one of yours I've not seen. Hope I can do it!
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James Inman
Date: 9/5/2015 9:53:00 AM
I'd like to see that poem. I don't know if you've read all of them or not, but it's a little depressing to think that someone could live my life's experiences in such a short time. Perhaps there are more poems and more chapters to come, perhaps.
Date: 9/3/2015 9:14:00 PM
WOW, remember what I told you about taking a challenge? Now THIS is what I call TaKING A CHALLENGE. Outstanding work!
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Date: 9/3/2015 8:44:00 PM
Very well composed titles poem. Wish you luck in the contest
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James Inman
Date: 9/5/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Njeri
Date: 9/3/2015 5:18:00 PM
Hi James, first this holds a POE feeling, then she begins to take form. Lauren, sad she seems to be nothing more than a face that keeps fading slowly. However, she seems to have a hold on the awesome imagery here. Well done... LINDA
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James Inman
Date: 9/5/2015 9:18:00 AM
You have no idea how nice of a compliment this is. Poe, one of the reasons I started reading. Thanks PD
Date: 9/2/2015 3:03:00 PM
Wonderfully written, good luck.
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James Inman
Date: 9/5/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thanks DM
Date: 9/2/2015 2:32:00 PM
James, looks like you have a winner no doubt, wonderfully penned, perfectly done, beautiful in every way and thanks for visiting my, eyes poem ~~
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James Inman
Date: 9/2/2015 2:50:00 PM
Thank you, BW.
Date: 9/2/2015 12:10:00 PM
Probably not the best idea to say this before the contest ends but I love this!
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James Inman
Date: 9/2/2015 2:19:00 PM
Pendleton, You can say nice things about my poems any time you want. Thanks
Date: 9/2/2015 11:52:00 AM
Tender thoughts and longing delicately woven with your titles create strong images, James. Good luck!
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James Inman
Date: 9/2/2015 2:18:00 PM
Thanks Kim, happy your feeling better. Hope you had a nice trip.
Date: 9/2/2015 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful ... CayCay
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James Inman
Date: 9/2/2015 2:17:00 PM
Thank you CayCay
Date: 9/2/2015 11:20:00 AM
The imagery is very beautiful you have woven the titles in so cleverly - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 9/2/2015 11:33:00 AM
Jan!! I think you read it before I even corrected a mistake I made in the format when I posted it. Thanks for the kind comment.

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