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Lusting Abyss, His Darkness - Finale

Warm, fuelled and spent, in exhausted appreciation Is this what we're heading for, since the dawn of creation Head now bowed in thought, is this lusting wonderment Does he know his spirits flowed, does he know he's heaven sent He looks down on his captor, having chosen his darkened choice To seduce this virgin white, having done, he's raised his voice *~* Whilst she walks away she gathers, thoughts, her tattered shreds Her silken robes of white, from the surface they are said Will we ever know the outcome, of the virgin standing alarmed Just who has seduced who, who has taken who's charm *~* To the surface this ogre looks, this lustful fuelled night Slowly he opens his eyes, from their dark, their brightly white *~* http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-21.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/16/2012 9:30:00 PM
Well, not all's that's well ends well.:( Interesting and mind captivating Acts, James! You've a well garnered imagination, have enjoyed these reads! Lots of happening to keep the reader enthralled.:) Nicely done, James!! Mikki
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Date: 5/16/2012 9:29:00 PM
Well, not all's that's well ends well.:( Interesting and mind captivating Acts, James! You've a well garnered imagination, have enjoyed these reads! Lots of happening to keep the reader enthralled.:) Nicely done, James!! Mikki
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Date: 5/12/2012 4:58:00 PM
A beautiful story James, you have done a great job in this - like it alot. Brilliant, dear poet....you are good!!!!! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/10/2012 4:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Glad that I stopped by..Sara
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