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Luscious Love Lingers--Linda-Marie

Peaches plumb perfection Put peeled pickled and pleasing Fruit fresh for freezing Icecream in innocent Hands has hundreds of hugs Peaches perfection Love light and lasting Eternal ecstasy everlasting Taste tongue to tummy totally tantalizing! Smell the scent, senses soaring Fragrantly frolicking face to face Final fun frozen forever Luscious love lingers! **For Linda-Marie's contest note * tough subject for me Peaches are my favorite fruit and I just did the best I could with it.

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Date: 11/8/2010 1:45:00 PM
Such lovely words for a very sweet lady,Thanks Doris.Teresa
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations Doris on your win in Linda Marie's contest "Luscious Love Lingers"Alliteration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2010 8:01:00 PM
Doris, a nice win in the contest. that first line sure showed your love of peaches, Doris! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/7/2010 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest with this beautiful poem.. Constance
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Date: 9/6/2010 7:42:00 AM
Congrats Doris on your win in my LLL Alliteration contest... a wonderful write and effort ..appreciate your support ... enjoy your win this holiday with luv..
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Date: 8/27/2010 7:43:00 PM
thankxxx for supporting my contest Doris.. good luck..with luv..
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Date: 8/23/2010 10:45:00 PM
A lovely alliteration dear doris. All the best for the contest. Thanks for your kind comments.
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:46:00 PM
Doris you did great with this.. All the best for Linda's contest.. Love Wilma
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:08:00 PM
Excellent entry, Doris. Outstanding write. Good luck. Thanks for your kind words. xxxRalph
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:58:00 PM
This is a very nice poem. Great job. Good luck in this very hard contest, Shirley
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:38:00 PM
Doris, I go to the doctor tomorrow at 1:30. Wish me luck! Thanks for asking. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:27:00 PM
You made good use of the alliteration, Doris. It was a tough theme. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:28:00 PM
A nice poem with alliteration with peaches as a theme, Doris
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