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Lucky Charm

I have never been lucky enough
to come upon a four leaf clover....
maybe they only grow in Ireland.

Find a penny, pick it up,
and all day you will have good luck...
my fortune didn't improve by much.

I could carry a rabbit's foot
around with me in my pocket....
I guess that rabbit wasn't so lucky, though.

Every time I find a ladybug
and try to capture it in a jar....
it just flies away from me.

I could pry a horseshoe
from a pony's hoof....
which is harder than you think.

But, I think I would rather have you
as my lucky charm,
you are as rare as a four leaf clover,
you are worth a lot more than a penny,
you are as gentle as a rabbit's foot or a ladybug,
and you are luckier than a horseshoe,
because you were much easier to find.

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  1. Date: 5/25/2014 11:35:00 PM
    Big congrats on a fine win my friend!!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 5/26/2014 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the kind congrats, Robert. I appreciate it very much!
  1. Date: 5/25/2014 10:55:00 PM
    Kelly, this poems is tops.. The form, style, words, imagination, heart.. You bring it all and mix it right. You're the true winner!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 5/26/2014 5:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Dave. You made my day with your kind comments! I appreciate the support. It really means a lot!
  1. Date: 5/25/2014 12:41:00 PM
    Hi Kelly, I found a four leaf clover once. I thought I'll just hang on to this. Walked about fifty feet or so, was crossing a road, got hit by a car. I guess the clover was lucky In a way. I only had badly bruised legs.I did like this write. I enjoyed the build up to finding your good luck charm. Well thought out as always. The piece flows so nicelyfrom start to finish. Love Is the greatest charm of all. I enjoyed this read a lot. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 5/26/2014 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Mike. I'm sorry to hear of your misfortune after you found that four leaf clover. I'm glad you weren't hurt any worse. Maybe that clover was lucky after all?.... I don't know if I believe in bad luck or superstitions, but it was fun to write about. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem, my friend. Thank you for the nice comments!
  1. Date: 5/23/2014 9:25:00 PM
    Congrats on the win my friend!!

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 5/25/2014 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, once again, Robert!
  1. Date: 5/22/2014 4:57:00 PM
    What a charming poem ;-P hehe. Grats on your medal well done. :)

    Deschler Avatar Kelly Deschler
    Date: 5/23/2014 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the sweet comments and the kind congrats. I appreciate it, Casarah! :)
  1. Date: 5/22/2014 12:59:00 PM
    Kelly, .. Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog ENCORE" if you'd like. Always & Forever <3 LINDA ;-)

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..This is a well thought out work with a good point of view..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 11:19:00 PM
    This is a very romantic and loving poem. Its creative how you linked the charms to love. Nice job

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 1:59:00 PM
    I like the thought. ... I need myself my own lucky charm. sometimes the figurines I have. don't work. .. enjoyed. .linds

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 2:56:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 4:39:00 PM
    This is a sweet romantic piece. Very descriptive which I like also. Very nice build up to main point of your poem Kelly. Very well done once more. I like your poems.