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Love's Last Call - Triplet

Whenever he reeks of alcohol I know he’s been on an angry crawl To flush away heartache’s waterfall 8/14/11 Received 3rd place in "Triplet" contest

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/7/2011 11:19:00 AM

I love the hearache's waterfall! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2011 6:22:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comment on my ode, Susan. It's a true story and the newspaper staff had fun with the cartoon. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 8/16/2011 1:52:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Susan : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2011 7:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Triplet" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/16/2011 5:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Susan. This is truly a deserving poem! Enjoyed it thie second time I read it just as much as the first time. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2011 12:10:00 AM

Hey, I am seeing down here that you got a third place. Awesome, Susan! Congratulations. A unique topic too!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2011 11:15:00 PM

Congrats Susan on a tremendous third place win in this contest.. wonderful words luv..

John Freeman

Date: 8/15/2011 11:12:00 PM

Great to see your poem honored a third place Susan. Great to see your worthy poem honored. Way to Go! Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 8/15/2011 11:10:00 PM

Great to see your poem honored a third place Susan. Great to see your worthy poem honored. Way to Go! Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 9:26:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, Susan

Randy Biffany

Date: 8/15/2011 5:57:00 PM

I'm sorry you didn't like, enoy or "get" my poem, but I do like your's. I appreciate your feedback and know I need to edit, revise and delete some, but have been busy. Perhaps this is one I should eliminate. Biffany

Jack Horne

Date: 8/15/2011 2:46:00 PM

Yes, there are many people like this, sadly. Insightful write, Susan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2011 1:29:00 PM

Some people do think alcohol will drown their sorrows, but it doesn't work when I try it. Only makes me sadder. Excellent terzanelle, Susan. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn

Ismael Nieves

Date: 8/15/2011 12:09:00 PM

nice write!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 10:28:00 AM

Thanks for the entry if it's for my contest, Susan

Johnny Sumler

Date: 8/15/2011 9:35:00 AM

You write with a creative pen Susan. Three lines that tell of a dramatic story to a gripping title. Wonderful!

Lisa Cooper

Date: 8/15/2011 9:21:00 AM

wonderful write susan.